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person lone_child
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh noooo!!! haley died!! *wails*

thanks for another awesome chapter *sniffles*
person ayachan
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHY IS HALEY DEAD?? I LOVED HALEY!! omfg, find the $%^$&^#@$%$^ that killed him and make him suffer. Haley saw this coming didn't he? He totally knew this was going to happen.
person Anon
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*stunned*
person blaze
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i don't think i can stop crying!!!! :(. i hope Az kills them all!!!! very well written. i hope Ping will be ok!
person Tash
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Freakin' SOB's UGH! How dare they kill Haley! I hope Az tears them to peices! Poor Haley! I loved him! How could you kill Haley, the lovable one? *.* Now I know true evil....
person Laur
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
KIIIIX!!!

How could you???!??!?!??!?!??!?

NOT HALEY!!! NOOOO NOT HALEY!

I am in shock.
person k
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sniff ... sniff ... sob

Well, the chapter works for me and I'm actually glad you won't do another Lazarus ... even though I love Haley and don't really want him dead, but I believe the impact will do wonders to the storyline and lends credence to it. Somehow I got the impression Haley had face to face with Lanseng and knew exactly that he was to die. Granting the brothers with his last night instead of his wife is somehow heartbreaking and sweat altogether. I don't know why, but I want to know about Bruce's feelings about Haley having been killed. I somehow imagine him mourn for the loss.

Sending Hades to William was nice. Still, he isn't really treated as a family-member. He is more an accessory of Liam. I want someone to save him a piece of birthday-cake and ranting at him for missing out the party and definitively want at least one person he can pour out his heart to without being reproached. Thank you, Claudius for trying! Skell had a bad start with Hades, but don't they make perfect buddies in the killing-business area?

Thank you for the chapter(s)!
person violetstorm
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi Kiix!!!! It's been awhile since I had a chance to put in a review but I've been keeping up with all your stories you are working on. I am really into and excited about Candy. Even though Haley is dead, I think it was a brilliant move, as a writer. It will keep people coming back for more. I was talking about your stories so much, I got my sister addicted to you as well. Thanks for your brilliant, entertaining and fun writing. I can't wait to read on! You ROCK!
person twilight
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg haley!! ;___; now the heads are going to roll now.
person Ruffner
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awe that was way too cute. with a HUGE tough of sexy. And a Ginormous touch of hott! I hope that hades get his head out of his ass.