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I'm so glad it's not already over.I hope this epilogue will be veryyyyyyyy long ! LOL I offered myself "the black tower yesterday"...yayyyyyy !!!Aida

interesting....i like the lyrics that they sing....seems to suit the chapter and what X is feeling. can't wait for the next part.

Whoa! Not bad for writing your own lyrics, what a cliff hanger. Sorry to hear about kitten #2, I know loosing a pet is really hard especially to loosing more than one so quickly. Let us know what mama kiix thought of the book! I'm looking forward to after xmas so I can start getting my own gifts, lol!

I *LOVE* this chapter and the song was grate,it made me want to cry.I hope Armor gets there in time and save Xavier before it's too late.

Crazy Epilogue. X is killing me. Man up X. Armor will come back!

X, be a man...stop being such a ass:)

woot! I love candy =)

yes, yes, bad steph! brother, not candy.
oops... too late

WHOA! ABSOLUTELY GREAT EPILOGUE! i love how you make Xavier now...i feel something losing in the last chapter but you kind of prepare this in your sleeve! AMAZING!
What actually the brotherhood want to do to Xavier? please update soon cause this chapter makes me itching to know...
Hmm...i see no update e-mail as usual ... is there none or i just dun get it?

Cheers,

Ri

Yayyy congratulations to Skell & Lanny!!! :)
Hurry up and get part two up, I'm really intrigued as to what exactly is going to occur..........
Oh! Maybe Kain can be a plot bunny/focus for Book 6?

Kudos for the beginning of a great epilogue!!

~Spiritxx

Okay I didn't get to review the previous chapter . . . I don't think . . . crap can't remember. Anyway I like what you did with Liam & William. I know you had the poll; I went & put in my 2 cents that it would be nice that neither died. I'm really happy how you did it, I think it works so well this way. Liam is eternal, & his knowledge won't always be lost & vampires live for a hell of a time so this should work out; at least until either Seth grows up & remembers Hades, Hades can't keep his hands to himself anymore, but what will happen to William in the end? At least he is getting some time w/Hades to himself after his grand motion of giving part of his life to Liam for them to be together & leave X alone. Not sure what is happening in this chapter, get the updates on their lives. The extra point towards just how old Amour really is & why he is going through the things he is; nice someone is on his side there. Get they are trying to help X cause he is having a meltdown of sorts, but what is this going to do I'm lost right now. They are being so careful about not getting any scent on him. . . . what the heck . . . are we chumming the waters for the elusive Amour fish? Putting X out in his slut clothes Amour use to put on him & taking him to a club. Won't take long for someone's scent to get on that body w/those clothes or lack of clothes on that's for sure. If Amour does show up your looking at one hell of a hormonal temtation for him. Well I hope your dive into self publishing works out, I'll have to wait till after XMas to see about any purchases like this for myself but I'm game! Good luck hope it all works out well. Can't wait till the next update, keep up the great work. Glad to hear your back on the net at home now, hooray!
littleolmee