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person k
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not from Morgan, please not from Morgan!

Nice chapter - I like Sang Kyu ... well, I like all of the male Imperials, but the silent Sang Kyu is special in between the uproar-causers. I don't agree - the whelps will know Haley. The brothers, the Imperials basically the whole pod will paint a vivid picture of Haley - in mind, heart, words, paint and music. They will know their father just like the winglets knew theirs. Could Britta possibly know frowny Lycan or Bruce? BTW, how is Bruce?

I offer virtual toffees to your muses. Go write the next chapter (no, not pressing, not in the least...)!
person blaze
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the action scene turned out really good, i wasn't disappointed!! poor X and the brothers, they have so much more to deal with :(.
person twilight
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mwah!! you do not disappoint. the vengeance is soo sweet. im impressed with the way he handled the assassin. very messy. who is sang kyu's mom?? are there more lycans we need to know about?
person lone_child
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*wails*
thankies for another chapter!
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm the only one who isn't really sad that Haley died. It seemed like he would die from the very beginning of this book, I don't know why. Must be the whole Britta-Bitch thing.
person steph291
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ch. 11 - very powerful. I totally cried.
person steph291
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ch. 12 - wow... never a dull moment w/ you! your plots are like steamrollers. poor brotherhood didn't even get a chance to change clothes!

BTW- I thought their first friend was Reggie, not Haley.

person lavcea
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
okay. you redeemed yourself from that debacaled last chapter called Tentecles, so, with this, i grant you forgiveness. great chapter and lord help those 6 fools that had haley killed...and they're gonna get it real nasty for trying to kill the pups too...tick tock
person yunasgrace
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOW COULD YOU KILL HALEY!!!!! *runs off and sobs in corner*
i really liked the last few chapters coz we finaly see Haley again and you go and kill hi off... should have killed Ping instead, we hvent seen as much of her to get as attached...

thats really upset me now...i know its only a story but...but... ITS HALEY *breaks down*

you better gve that shooter what he deserves and i dont mean a quick death... make sure you drag it aout. Ill be routing for Azrael and the rest of the brotherhood

now that ive ranted about that chappie i would like to say that i really love all of your books. i was actually upset that now ive finished what youve written so far so ow ive gotta wait for updates...this is why sometimes its better to read finished stories so you aint got the wait xDDDDDD

great story though (all of em xD) *thumbs up*

Yunasgrace
person Ruffner
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
was it absolutely necissary to kill haley? i mean really? that was just cruel.