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person lone_child
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thankies for another awesome chapter!
person Cindyip
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Blink* Hello Lycan Az, welcome to your new empire:)
person Anon
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The talisman was interesting. There hasnt been a lot of magic up until now.
person Ana
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...
So it's that chick you mentioned before isn't it? Um... Hades' daughter?
NEXT CHAPTER, NOW!!!!!... please? :)
person Cindyip
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Sobs* It's so soon, Harley barely had a chance to growT_T
person violetstorm713
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really good chapter...can't wait to read the next scene. Still a little confused about Sang Kyu's history in this chapter, I think I got a little lost. Thanks for your creative output!
person laur
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my...sadness over Haley!!!

McDonalds comment got me chucklin. new chappie soon.
person AsyenMari
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey kiix,
The beginning of this chapter really made me wonder "who the fuck would be after Haley?", but that question was torn asunder by the conclusion of the chapter; the motive, as I understand it, was not to kill Haley, but to destroy the position he upheld so that the unnamed Lycan could very well take over. Alas, it seems that there is even more weight to be piled upon the brothers' shoulders. Lord Emperor, fractured lover to many, father, devoted husband, and now Lycan leader? THis should prove to be interesting-- I do hope that the brothers are up to it.

Thank you for reviewing ~It was pouring outside~. It really means alot to me that you like it. I'm beyond stressed at the moment, but I'm attempting to construct a bit of background to the story, which is proving to be exceedinly difficult for me as Torin & Samayel (two of my boys from my other fic) keep intruding on my mind wanting their say in how the story should progress. *sigh* It really makes you feel cramped in your own head doesn't it?

Well as usual, great chapter...please continue k?
Asyen
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter. The fight was "clean" in terms of writing, I usually get bored easily with fightings but this one worked for me.
person NessaC
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Short but omg. Amazingly well written, really quite gory and I think I read a little fast 'cause for a moment I was confused and thought Wills had really died but then Az took the vocal binding off and yeah. But woah.

...as if SAXS didn't have enough on their hands haha but I'm looking forward to this meeting with Britta. Sounds immensely urgent, and it's undoubtedly going to make way for lots of writing XD :D :D

~Spiritxx