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omg! This chapter is hilarious! I couldn't stop grinning and chuckling at Azrael b/c of the way he acted and especially at the end. It totally cracked me up and not a bad way to start my very hectic day. Anyways... love the chapter, sorry can't review more, and can't wait for more.

m i l k x ness


ps. WOOOOT! First reviewer of this chapter!! MUAHAHHAHAHAHA!!!

Typo I thought I’d point out – “It’s know wonder the Den Mother would curse your name.” I think you mean ‘It’s no wonder…”

Amazing. I loved the “dance off” and found it hilarious when Az kinda sumbled the end with Skell’s wings, but hey the Overseer seems to like him! Can’t wait for the next chapter, I’m so glad your fingers are up and running again! (err typing?) :P

~Spiritxx

okay - that chapter was HOT! i wanna see that in action...you cheeky little bastard....great line kiix...hell, great update!

Now that is dancing with wolves. You didn't lie with that chapter title. AZ better watch out all the girls just love him, that cheeky little bastard. Very appropriate. Mortal Combat song. Good chapter, was nice to see a little vampire saga going, glad you got your duckies in a row for the story.

Yeah, another chapter!

As much as I usually love your writing, I dislike this chapter - contentwise. There I thought the lycan cart was on track, but you just had to surprise me by knocking it over. The dancing lycan are too much for me. They are turning into an absurd bunch of trained circus-'dogs'. In the face of Haley's death that's too much for my liking. Where are the strong beasty lycans? You introduced them as proud and feral, animalic in nature. I want those back! Why that dancing stuff? They don't do that when slicing whelps and pups to shreds. In my opinion the fighting for the pack shouldn't be less painful and blody as the house ranking. Wolves have fangs for a purpose and it ain't dancing.

F*** time is flying by, maybe more later. Even though, I love your writing!

haha^^Loved this one. The Mortal Combat music is a killer. Thank the gods for youtube.

oh man what i wouldn't give to have a visual of this!!! it must be beautiful...kudos.

Azrael is amazing and I love you Saga!!!! It's so amazing and well thought out. You have truly created a world of your own and I always look forward to reading more.

"Here I am buck naked except for a smile and a tray in a closet full of adult male Alpha Lycan."

*giggles* Oh, how I envy him.

let the trials begin! *smirk* lol, i can't wait for the next chapter!! this one was really good, and i cant wait for the main event!