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person Anon
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I for one dont really mind were this is going. The only thing I'm missing is the next chapter..
person Cindyip
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Az, I think this is the longest you have ever been out:)
person Twitch
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Az is such a badass. :) I loved this chapter and I cannot WAIT for the next one.
person laur
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
its hard getting everything together. but i love the story anyway!
person silverwind
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
keep it coming hon this is a great story.....
person steph291
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ch 16 - omigod, dancing! Az was great in the chapter. I'm starting to like him better... is he the same ol' Az?
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like what he says at the ending "I am the cheeky little bastard" or something like that, and very cool chapter it reminded me of that one dancing movie. I can't remember the movie. This is now my fav chapter like i said i love the ending.
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ah i'm soo sorry, the other review under whitedragon is me, i just changed my login thingy and i just wanted to let you know.
person Cindyip
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Az, all work and no play makes Azzie a grump(^_~)
person Ana
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So does Vlad carry around that mix tape all the time? Cheeky little bastard is the best nickname they have yet. I don't think I've been commenting much but I've been reading. I think your Lycan nation interesting I definitely was not expecting the dance-off and shiny rocks. Well, best of luck with the writing.