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person littleolmee
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so much going on. Wessel is back and who is this woman? If she hadn't died in an earlier story I'd thought it was Sex's princess, she or her family anyway had dealing with Wessel. I guess the wolves are getting to know the whole brotherhood here. Very bloody chapter but I loved it. Thanks for the update, keep up the good work and take care.

littleolmee
person lone_child
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thankies for another wonderful chapter!
person miles
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
One of the best chapter !
person Cindyip
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Vicious little things, aren't thet? (^_~)
person OlgaM
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story! And your Russian is good))
person NessaC
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaah!!!! Worst cliffie you've left us with in a while, I think at least.
More pleaseee!! Didn't get the dance moves on that bit of paper either :P But ah well...

Next please! :) :)

~Spiritxx
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
taking the time from my finals to read this, finally. Yes, a day or two in delay from reading your stories will stress me even more and drive me crazy. It SUCKS that i know you updated from the email but school internet blocked aff.net... S U C K S ! I almost screamed with horror after i happily pressed the link only to get a screen that says the site was blocked. I was like NOOOOOOOO!! NOOOOOO!!! OMFG!!! @_________@ And was basically FREAKING OUT! But now all is well... =breathes deeply and slowly=

So very interesting chapter, and another Lycan couple though i truly do love Manu and Pytor. Oh pleeease please PLEASE do a smexing scene between the two even if it's in Dessert Cart. But wow... either i was really excited or i read really fast or something but this chapter felt a little short... it might be b/c Azrael finished the fight so quickly o___o either way me likey likey. SO! Can't wait for next chappie, can't wait for more fighting, can't wait for more more more!

I'll be waiting (and going crazy from finals. GAH ONE MORE WEEK AFTER THIS WEEK!! ROARRRR!!!),
m i l k x ness

ps. sorry... and no... i'm not going crazy.. just stressed and lack of sleep.. really. Believe me.
person steph291
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ch 17 - who doesn't like Candy! lemme at em! I like the new twist in the story, and this Az is more interesting than usual. the dancing thing is weird, but the reasoning behind it is solid.
person K
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
'Vladimir was potatoes and wet dog.' ??? Since when? In Caramel Vlad tasted like rabbit (Caramel, 37)

I still don't like the whole dancing-thing, but otherwise the lycan-cart seems back on track. Bruce and Kyu ... have fun guys!
Azrael is making a fine impression. May I assume the other two brothers are done grieving for now to help little brother with fucking up the traitor, or where did Sex's speed in Azrael come from?

Bruce will act finely as deputy any time Azrael is with the rest of the pod. He's after all one hell of a busy pup and his other mates surely won't move in Dennings-Central.

Good chapter. Keep it rolling!
K
person littleolmee
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Az seems to have a system down now with the dancing and er . . . his kind of dancing. Liked the outcome with Gregory, he came across as a not so bad guy, interested in doing what was best for the nation. D day is getting closer it seems for frown-y guy.