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person Aida
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's a little death everytime one of this book ends.Armor,Marcus,Claudius,Sex,Xavier,Skell,Azrael are such a constent in my life and for such a long time now that it's always hard to have to leave them for a while.I know that Armor will return and I want to see him doing the right thing this time.Wonderful work as always.AIda
person littleolmee
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great ending, can't wait to see what happens in Book 6; so much to look forward to.
person Cindyip
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to book 6, X and Armor need to be together:)
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great ending! i have to say that i am very hopefully about the future...wow raissa is getting married and having children...with ike...fun times ahead in this house hold...can't wait for book 6...do you think it might be the last book...i have to say that i hope not but it's just because i love xavier so much that i would miss him...can't wait for you next thing...have a great holiday!
person Laur
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!

Title Ideas. Chocolate, Coconut, Confection!, Cherry, Cookies.

I wonder if the babies will be like Micheal from Underworld. Half Vamp and Lycan and scrumptious. LOL!

Have a Happy Holidays and New Year!
person NessaC
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
Heart-wrenching ending, but you've definitely got material for Book 6 - between Kain fitting in, puppies in a few months (nine?) and Armor/Marcus coming back in nine, well... all you need is a plot to pull it all together!
A fantastic job on another book :)

~Spiritxx
person steph291
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please! please! Armor to the rescue!!!
person NessaC
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
They may be depressing lyrics, but they're well written!
So sorry to hear about Pizza and Aku :( *hugs*
I like never-ending epilogues :) It means more Candy before it ends! (duh? yes I know..)
Poor X *hugs*

~Spiritxx
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! i'm hanging at the edge of my seat ^-^
person ri
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOSH! OH MY GOSH! OH MY GOSH! Hi dose of angsty and with song from his children combo! Damn..i wanna punch Wolf if i just as angsty as Xavier and just went on rampage there. I really can feel Xavier's despair...
I never read this kind of 'another climax' on epilogue before! this is just great. You're a master in playing with reader's heart!

Please update soon! LOVE THIS SO MUCH! I hope Armor - Xavier relationship recover in hard and unique way. Dun just easy (if u read the ending of Crimson Spell, one of yaoi manga) u'll kinda understand how the writer played with reader heart in the whole book, but just give that kind of solution...easy solution. Surely this won't be enough with just a hug and kiss...
If Sex Cludius angsty before recover in such hard way (until duel and suicide attempt), since u said this is much hurt than sex's heartache i really hope this will be harder.

Ri