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schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter...altough I do have to say I miss the brothers getting some lovin'. I am so happy Xavier finally should up, oh how I've missed him. I wonder who is this female after the brothers. Could it be Hades' daughter? I know she was mentioned earlier in Candy. Anywho...that's for another amazing chapter!
person Ana
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG that chapter was good. I was litterally on the edge of my seat. I felt like my eyes could move across the screen fast enough. That made my day.

Good luck with the job search. I kinda need one of those too... damn bills.
person lavcea
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
is this the chick who son was killed by skell? she's the only one who would know all the buttons to push to get to them. are you bring that crazy bitch back? i can't think of any other female that they have pissed off, that wasn't family that is - and brittia's dead, so we know it ain't her. good update, and now i'm going to have to go back and re-read some stuff so i can find out who this is.
person Negai
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Every chapter just gets more and more exciting!
person steph291
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ch. 18 - wow, kiix! wonderful chapter! again, you did an amazing job. your skills really are improving! =) can't wait to find out what happens!!!!!!!!!

PS - jeez, and we thought Az was merciless!
person k
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
$50, wow. In that case I better not tell you about Within Temptation ... or I'll just risk it. In my opinion the track 'Our solemn hour' from the album 'The heart of everything' just screams for Azrael.

http://www.magistrix.de/lyrics/Within%20Temptation/Our-Solemn-Hour-167563.html

I fear you are going to unload another piece of Liam's luggage on the brother's head. Am I right assuming Morgan to be the mysterious woman? Does she mistake the brothers for the reincarnated William or is she just going ot wipe the house of von D. out? In that case she whould have to be after Claudius as well. Oh, the suspense! I just hope my beloved honeybee won't get hurt again. Hurry on writing, please! No seriously, take yourself as much time as you need - finding a new job usually is a bitch. Good Luck!
person Anon
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mmm... true mayhem. I'm starting to take a liking to Endellion. She has character. And I find it interesting that the brotherhood can be fluffy and yet so coldblooded. As a reader of fiction one usually get to view the coldblooded characters from afar. Not so in this case. I find it.. refreshing. A strange choice of words, perhaps, considering the blood and gore. But still.
person Rora
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EEEEWWWWWW! Ew! Icky! That was definitely one of the more graphically violent chapters. The tone of it seems different from usual somehow?
person blaze
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhhh, and the plot thickens!!!! this chappie was really good, :)! i wonder who 'she' is??
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooOoooOOoo omgz! I absolutely love this chapter! So much has happened! =spazzes= i am completely shocked that they would want to get Ping. In fact i still don't get it. Isn't OW after our lovely vamp brothers? Then why get Ping? But man... i can't believe they were dumb enough to try to check out how Ed, Sex, Az, and Skell was doing. Talk about begging for a death wish. Anyways, i can't for another chapter...

m i l k x ness
ps. wow.. i can't wait to see how the Lycans respond to all of this... after seeing the brothers basically torture those stupid humans. Anyways.. can't wait.