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schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's so funny to see the brotherhood all grown up. They really take charge now. This was a good recap of all that has happened since Haley died. It was good to hear Sex laugh a little. They really need that, not to mention some hot lovin' (heeheehee), Thanks for this update. I really missed Claudius. I think he might be the sexiest one to me, out of everyone. I even started smoking cloves just to smell what he might smell like. And can I say delicious! It made me want my very own Claudius!
person AsyenMari
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kixx,
So sorry I haven't reviewed in so long. It seems that whenever life eases up a bit so I can catch up on reading, it returns to crush me again. Ah well, such is life. Kedokies, on with the reviews... I love the twist this story is taking, what with Az saddled as Lycan King(I expected that one though- he can be so damn regal at times grr...), and the brothers attempting to cope with the staggering grief. I'm impressed, but not too suprised with how the Arashi clan has accepted Az and the brothers so warmly, as well as Vlad Manu and Pyotr(*snickers* I always spell his name wrong). I love how snuggly Manu/Pyotr are becoming it's so cute!!!! I await the next chapter and the comfort given by Marcus/Armor--and Sasha's minor ass kicking by Sex, that I hope will come from the next installment. You're really doing a fanfuckingtabuolous job on this entire series--I'm soo addicted, but heh you know that by now.
My only request...can you find a way to incorporate some "oh my gawd I missed you, let's comfort eachother" sex somewhere?
*offers ramune soda and pocky as bribery*
Asyen
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter. Very nicely done. Now that that everything has become much clearer, i'm glad that the brothers at least have a little time to themselves to grieve for Haley and think about their new enemy. I know Sex is mad at his Dark Angel but in a way, it's sooooo sweet~ =hugs Sasha= It just shows that he really loves his Fallen~ =sighs dreamily= About Serephina, you've got the brothers and all us Loyals all confused but mad as hell at that b*tch! D< I can't wait for future chapters since i think i speak for all when i say we really want to know what's up with her; pissing everyone off by f*cking with the pod and all of us!! D< It makes me curious though, since the brothers and now Sasha doesn't even recognized her. So it makes me think that either she has something against her family, being a witch and all, or maybe the brothers killed someone dear to her in previous chapters or /something/ if you catch my drift.

I hope your hand feels better day by day and can't wait for next chapter~!

m i l k x ness
person Emily
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I can't offer you magnificent critiques, but only tell you how much I have enjoyed your series. Thanks for posting.
person newmoon
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lmao! "There is no need to advertise the goods,my King." classic.
person laur
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Im on pins and needles...

Is Serephina chick Hades daughter??? Why is she targeting the brothers? i dont understand what she gets out of this?

Soooo is Ping the brother's wife now too? AHHHHHHH! sooo much!

Awesome as usual!
person Cindyip
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ping payback time:)
person lone_child
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg! that was awesome! thanks for another chapter!
person k
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
quote: "medium height, medium built, average good looks, blonde with cold blue eyes." unquote - that surely sounds like someone we know. I have a feeling Honeybee is about to be hurt again. That sucks!

Gregor's oath made me wonder about a thing. While you made the Eastern lycan the origin of the Northern pack, Azrael is High Alpha to the Northern pack and a member of the Northern pack. I would expect Gregor to swear to defend the Blood of the Northern Lycan in first place. Doesn't defending the Eastern lycan around fall to the brother's duties? Whatsoever, that's not the point.

I liked that chapter! Good luck with the new job!
person Negai
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the ending... "You're fucked bitch." I can't wait to see retribution.