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person Lioncourt
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“If you want a week with Claudius, you got my okay.”

Hehe. He's got my ok too.
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh i missed Xavier so much. I have to say it, he is my favorite brother.
That outfit sounds delicious that Xavier is wearing. I can only imagine the fun that can be had with it.
Haley's wake is bound to be sad but also a celebration of his life. I know X will do him proud. I still can't believe that the brothers are married again. Talk about huge ass family. This one seems to grow every other chapter. I love it.
I can't wait for the next update. Keep them coming. I just love your writing!
person Cindyip
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
X make us prove and show us how tough you really are:)
person laur
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter!!!

I wonder how this is going to end...
person Ana
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Question: With so many characters do you keep a list with descriptions and traits or do you memorize all of your creations?
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i do understand what you mean when you said you had writer's block when writing this chapter. Anyone would when it's about Haley's wake. Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter! I wonder what will happen. I feel bad because the brothers have already been through so much but I get this bad feeling that that witch is going to do something horrible... again ;__; anyways, laters!
person Jae
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it's really sad, but i still want to cry everytime you've mentioned saying good-bye to haley. :*(
person Anon
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was such a fun chapter to read. I had a great time picturing the posters. ^^
person steph291
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ch 23 (and everything before that I missed) -- nan, kiix, I just LOVE Sex and Sasha! I thoroughly enjoyed these last few chapters, but can't believe it ended in a cliffy! grrr =p
person Ri
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It seems not much plot in this chapter, but since it's Haley's request, i'm okay with that (i really like Haley and claudius).

Is it possible to find some angsty chapter like what happened before between X-Claudius, and Skell in Orel Wessel in the future? Because those chapter really touching and heartwrenching!! *i love those*. While lately, the pods has already settled and looks ready for final encounter and happily ever after. I hope i find another twisting plot that nobody guess like u did in My Hostage, My Love.

Keep up the good work. Watching ya,

Cheers,

Ri