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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
X bring on the melee:)
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heya!
Well, I finally caught up, but I couldn't say that it's a happy occasion. I'd now have to wait to read a new chapter. But I guess I shouldn't be complaining because I have tonns of other books I must read if I ever with to leave the university. Nevertheless, this 'little'story will definitely be my Saturday morning break-from-the-hideous-reality. I'd been looking for something nice to read for a while before I found the saga, and I must say you've been easing my hunger for quite a while. I'm quite the slow reader and indulge myself in it deeply. And, yes, it's been a wild ride - sorry for not reviewing for until now, by the way, I know it sucks, I've written things myself - and although sometimes I was rather sceptical about the road you were walking down, it has been working out spectacularly. God speed, I say.
I think I 'fell' for this story the first chapter I read. Our Little Hero Xavier ripping the nose of his tormentor in Cake - I couldn't help but to like the little deviant and the affection has only grown since.
There were some typing mishaps I noticed and some of the sentences were rather wonky, it kind of disturbed little-perfectionist-me, but the lazy-butt-me undertsands, that this is alas a first draft (and believe me, I've had to print out one of my stories to correct everything and it was agony). It's still great though and I totally understand writers who wouldn't want to get a beta anywhere near their story. It's much more fun to put yourself up to the task and write the hell as you want to.
And *laughs* I remember trying to figure out what in the devil's name is 'syn'. I'm not from an English-speaking cultural bacground, so I looked it up from the dictionary. haha, it wasn't until I reached the end of the chapter that I understood what you meant by it. Then I had a big 'headdesk' moment. I've studied Russian (can't speak it actually, even if you break my fingers) but never tried to put the language down in English alpahbet before. It's kind of easy to do with my own mother tongue, but still, I must give you credit for trying - and succeeding - in bringing in other languages to your story. You might want to use Cyrillic though, but I have no idea whether AFF actually displays it correctly.
Thnaks for the efforts you have been paying for this story, it's been felt thoguhout it that you're at it with the whole of your being. I only wish I could take a break from life and write like I used to, authors like you inspire people to write themselves - and believe me, there aren't a lot like you.
X)
Well, I finally caught up, but I couldn't say that it's a happy occasion. I'd now have to wait to read a new chapter. But I guess I shouldn't be complaining because I have tonns of other books I must read if I ever with to leave the university. Nevertheless, this 'little'story will definitely be my Saturday morning break-from-the-hideous-reality. I'd been looking for something nice to read for a while before I found the saga, and I must say you've been easing my hunger for quite a while. I'm quite the slow reader and indulge myself in it deeply. And, yes, it's been a wild ride - sorry for not reviewing for until now, by the way, I know it sucks, I've written things myself - and although sometimes I was rather sceptical about the road you were walking down, it has been working out spectacularly. God speed, I say.
I think I 'fell' for this story the first chapter I read. Our Little Hero Xavier ripping the nose of his tormentor in Cake - I couldn't help but to like the little deviant and the affection has only grown since.
There were some typing mishaps I noticed and some of the sentences were rather wonky, it kind of disturbed little-perfectionist-me, but the lazy-butt-me undertsands, that this is alas a first draft (and believe me, I've had to print out one of my stories to correct everything and it was agony). It's still great though and I totally understand writers who wouldn't want to get a beta anywhere near their story. It's much more fun to put yourself up to the task and write the hell as you want to.
And *laughs* I remember trying to figure out what in the devil's name is 'syn'. I'm not from an English-speaking cultural bacground, so I looked it up from the dictionary. haha, it wasn't until I reached the end of the chapter that I understood what you meant by it. Then I had a big 'headdesk' moment. I've studied Russian (can't speak it actually, even if you break my fingers) but never tried to put the language down in English alpahbet before. It's kind of easy to do with my own mother tongue, but still, I must give you credit for trying - and succeeding - in bringing in other languages to your story. You might want to use Cyrillic though, but I have no idea whether AFF actually displays it correctly.
Thnaks for the efforts you have been paying for this story, it's been felt thoguhout it that you're at it with the whole of your being. I only wish I could take a break from life and write like I used to, authors like you inspire people to write themselves - and believe me, there aren't a lot like you.
X)
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh this just begs for the next chapter. I really hope this scene continues on peacefully, though I somehow doubt it just a little. Good luck on the next chapter, are you getting any still images on it?
-Spiritxx
-Spiritxx
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, can't wait for more:)
PS: X is such a nice thoughtful daddyXP
PS: X is such a nice thoughtful daddyXP
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I miss Haley. Had to get that out of the way.
Xavier and the brothers wronged a female? I wonder who it could be. I wonder if it is someone from the previous books but I can't recall anyone. I guess we will soon learn the identity of Sarah/Serphania. Oh wait...it could it be that little girl who once had a crush on Sex? I believe Sex ended up killing her parents. I know she became obsessively in love with him for a moment...but if I recall right, didn't she die too?
Well I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm so happy to see Xavier...I hope him and Armor will have some "special time" together. I know he misses his "apple-goodiness".
Great chapter...trying to wait patiently for the next.
Xavier and the brothers wronged a female? I wonder who it could be. I wonder if it is someone from the previous books but I can't recall anyone. I guess we will soon learn the identity of Sarah/Serphania. Oh wait...it could it be that little girl who once had a crush on Sex? I believe Sex ended up killing her parents. I know she became obsessively in love with him for a moment...but if I recall right, didn't she die too?
Well I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm so happy to see Xavier...I hope him and Armor will have some "special time" together. I know he misses his "apple-goodiness".
Great chapter...trying to wait patiently for the next.
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I had to blink away the tears as well. Thank you for continuing this epic drama.
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was gorgeous.
thankies for another awesome chapter~
thankies for another awesome chapter~
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
T.T The ending was sooo sad.... I miss Haley!
On the other hand. That Serephina better get killed soon! I don't want anyone else getting hurt or killed..
No one else is going to die right? At least for a while???
Well, I hope so. Patiently (not) waiting for the next chapter...
On the other hand. That Serephina better get killed soon! I don't want anyone else getting hurt or killed..
No one else is going to die right? At least for a while???
Well, I hope so. Patiently (not) waiting for the next chapter...
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
His abilities are changing...
The only down fall to this story is the growing characters. It is getting hard to remember who is who. I love it anyway!
The only down fall to this story is the growing characters. It is getting hard to remember who is who. I love it anyway!
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i jsut have a couple of questions.
1. i was reading the story over again sense you haven't been up dating and i was noticing a couple of things missing like when sex had that power to move things what happen to that?
2. an also what happened to the two other hell cats the ones for sex and az? thats all i have for now but for one more thing what the fuck r u going to update your freaken killing us.
1. i was reading the story over again sense you haven't been up dating and i was noticing a couple of things missing like when sex had that power to move things what happen to that?
2. an also what happened to the two other hell cats the ones for sex and az? thats all i have for now but for one more thing what the fuck r u going to update your freaken killing us.