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person ri
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahahahha..i know it's a bit impossible and unreasonable to make one of brother dissapeared. It needs event and guilt so big than just broke up with Armor, since Xavier now not alone..he got a whole pack on his shoulder. I have no clue where will u guide this story, but i kinda interested how 'unhappy ending' you said this will be.

For the title, i'm more into 'Cider'. It's not that i dun like chocolate (hey...i love hot chocolate so much)...but if this final book (IF this is final..ahahhaa) i dun think chocolate will be fit except u have somethin in mind that relate chocolate and the plot. and in my opinion, chocolate is more happy ending kind of story.
(damn...and then i forgot that this war and sad plot i just read entitled 'Candy' ahahahahha) okay then...it's for you to decide. I'm sure it'll be good. Honest...this is not just empty talk. I've read all of your books and i can say that i'm satisfied with ur story and plot that u play it makes a routine for me to check ur site. Now, as i agree with my friend that drop comment here as well, i cannot be satisfied with ordinary angsty story that u already create standard for yaoi angst good story. I even read any story u reccommend (Black opal ones)...XD it's like when u said it's good, it'll be good.

About the review and hit...dun bother with that. yours is just AMAZING! And maybe some readers just dun want to read Vampire saga from book 1 XD (when i read, it already book 3 or 4 i think...and it took me a month to ensure my friend to read the whole book---now she's addicted). Especially when u already took 1'st volume out.

I'm sorry for the bad news i hear about ur cats...and wanna says Merry Christmas (almost) and happy new year...
Keep Writing! just wanna say that u're one of my favourite author...

Ri (damn...i write long)
person ri
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
another comment...hope u not bored with this.

Damn armor...ur words kinda ensure Xavier to not going anywhere! what a trick! and he says that he won't be Liam... as if he ensure that Xavier won't get anyone better than him. Ughh...i wanna make Armor desperate! Make him feeling sorry before able to return to Xavier!

Wha?!! ur mom agreed. Cool! i was caught watching Junjou romantica and she kinda freaked out "My daughter watch 'fencing'" DAMN! and she like...only look at the hugging scene.ughh...

Ri
person littleolmee
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hooray for 'Black Tower' being Mother Approved! Hmm . . . I think my mom would turn in her grave if she read some of the things I've written, that says something about mama Kiix! Ah the apple didn't fall far from the tree, lol. Looking forward to the next story, personally I think Cider would be a neat title; with Armour & Marcus's essance being apple and Armour is trying to mature . . . aged apple juice is cider after all . . . if the next book is going to be about Armour coming back trying to earn his place beside X again, and maybe X will learn to not be so cynical and hard ass; a by product of his life as a human. Have a happy holiday season!
person Cindyip
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so new book soon? ^_^;;
person VES
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oi, sorry I havent reviewed you lately. :\ I've lost my drive for things, but I still enjoy reading your work as always. I was wondering if X was going to disappear and die, and like that other person, I thought it'd lead to good drama and such, but be very sad. There was probably enough death in this already though, hahahaha.
I'll try to really review you later, when I can think.

By the way: D8 Ive tried to tell you this before, and I dont know what happened, but I am no longer on your mailing list. :[
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love the ending of this fic. can't wait for more.
person J42
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a saga - thanks so much for all your hard work on this. Please definitely don't leave Marcus and Xavier "twisting in the wind"... we will miss them so much too! Looking forward to Marcus sweeping Xavier off his feet! Thanks again!
person ri
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is just simply awesome ending! It's sad..it's cliffie, but good. I'm surprised to see that Armor has become that cold..Damn. I'm curious about the next book! XD

Ri
person Cindyip
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I was wondering will Marcus & Armor ever get a new brother, now X has three brothers...will Marcus & Armor get get one more? Cause I think it would be interesting to see happens to that pod.
person lone_child
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my gooooood! that was such an awesome ending! you're an amazing writer! keep up the good work!