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Wow this was scary good. I still wonder who Serephania is...but to know that there might be other children belonging to X and the brothers out there is just weird. Wow this is bigger than I thought. This is exciting, intriguing, captivating and so much more. Thanks for the quick update. I can't wait for you next one!

OOh I have missed so many updates and got a wonderful big hunk of candy all in one bit, lol. Kiix what a tangled web you weave. Love the new addition of Ripley and his one man comedician routine. It's like he says outloud those things X and the brothers think. At least X didn't end up making the same type of mistake he did when Vlad came with Ripley, lol. So now we see where she comes from, sort of. Orel Wessel will not go quietly into the night will they? They want their white demon back, and the fact they have his children to train like they did Skell is probably just the start. I hate to even think what is happening to those children in the care of those people. It looks like the warmangoing has just begun. Great chapters, love where you are taking the story. Glad to hear you will be getting high speed internet soon, it's the best! I love mine. Good luck with it. Take care and thanks for all the lovely updates.

littleolmee
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The bitch!!! The bastards!!! Aaah what a great chapter, I can't wait to read the next part because this is seriously great.
Keep it up!! *gives chocolate chip cookies in offering*

-Spiritxx

Wow that is one major plot twist. I'm so hooked now.
By the way, interesting how Claudius and Ripley seem to be on the same level. I think they're kind of cute together. ^^

So the other day I get an urgent message from Laur. It was something to the effect of Kiix just posted an amazing chapter!!! I was like yea I know I just read it (in reference to 30), but then I come back and I read this (31) and... we'll you threw me for a loop. I thought I had it all figured out. I thought that I knew where this story was going. It seemed simple, but I suppose it never really is with you - that's why I keep coming back for more.

*takes a deep breath*... the only thing I can say is - YAAAAAAAAAAAA~!!!! So cool, I'm so hyped up now! Can't wait to get the brotherhood all kick-ass and revenge-like! Eagerly waiting for new chapters!

crazy i didn't expect that to happen but it would make sense cuz what ripley said about her having the past, present and the future or something like that. i reviewed eariler but my computer is being stupid so i had to start all over again. i can't wait to see what else happens. :)

OMG.... o.O
SIX????????? A SON??????? poor baby... T.T to be raised my orel wessel.... >.<
Please let the next chapter be some major ass whooping!!!!

What X as more children...they were in whose's hands *gasp*