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YES!

I think I guessed who this chick was....anywho...yea! for me. It still sucks...just because he left a little girl alive, now she is threatening his family for revenge. I mean come on, her family was the one who started it...but I guess this is how revenge goes...as long as one other family member is left alive they will ultimately seek revenge (maybe not all the time, but at least some of the time). I don't know if that made any sense. In my mind it did but I don't know...hmmm great chapter as usually. I look forward to your next update.
As far as My Hostage...I trust you...if it's time for Trevor to have another roll them let him have it...I just hope he gets to see Erik soon. Sometime tells me he remembers the love they have even if he doesn't have all the memories they shared.

Jesus Christ you really really really love t through some curves in to your stories cause i never would have thought of her but how did she figure out everything about who he is and all that i mean that was a complete shock to me an if i was reading in public i so would have made a fool of my self when i read who the woman was. but what about the kid.

:O :O :O

OMG.

woah. I don't know what to say. Great job on keeping the suspense, and great job on revealing who Serephina is! Looking forward to some more action as Ripley gets to his lab, and the mages set to work on the park... :)

-Spiritxx

OMGZZZ!!! I had my suspicion but still.. OMGZ!!! Nothing like the truth shoved up to one's face! =squeals= kyaaaa~ I cannot wait for the next chapter and everything!!!

Oh wow, great chapter. I forgot all about that one. Gee whiz is that an ever returning theme for this poor guy? That mercy will come back to bite you in the ass. There was that one girl, Princess and her mother that Hades kinda was screwing over. They thought they were helping Sex and caused so many problems. Now this girl. The brotherhood really don't do well with women do they? Will X and the others get closer to his human family in this story? He got use to being a vampire, became of the blue line, became close with the lycan, and now there is the delving into magic in this story. Ripley keeps telling X to get to know his father and reminding him that forever doesn't always last forever that he is loosing his chance to know an important part of his life. It seems that so many unexpected gifts come to X and the brotherhood, will magic come to them as well? I mean in a way some is, being they can go to the unending plane. WEll . . . can't wait to see what happens next, thanks for all the quick update, take care.

littleolmee
littleolmee2002@yahoo.com

i suspected it could've been some one from their past...but i also thought it could've been someone else. and now it makes even more sense, i didn't want to say anything in case i was wrong.

Bum bum bum!!!! The plot thickens!!!! Hmm...more children of the Boys line? Interesting...Oooh I like Ripley. Great job as usual kixx!!!
Asyen

*insane giggle. It would be really weird for one more to be added to the harem. It's already full, ne? At any rate, I love the new character and I hope they'll get Seraphina soon. I suspect it is connect with that Sarah girl in the first books. It makes sense, the name, the hate for the brothers. Am I right? Anyway, pls update soon and sorry for not reviewing, my net sucks. Hugs, Scarlet

*insane giggle. It would be really weird for one more to be added to the harem. It's already full, ne? At any rate, I love the new character and I hope they'll get Seraphina soon. I suspect it is connect with that Sarah girl in the first books. It makes sense, the name, the hate for the brothers. Am I right? Anyway, pls update soon and sorry for not reviewing, my net sucks. Hugs, Scarlet