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i love this chapter made me laugh at the ending. i like how sex says "i turned into a squishy puddle" or something like that. can't wait to read more.

hummm interestng....
Conforting sounds so familiar!

KYAAAAAAAAA~~ I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!! KYAAA~~ MOE~!!!!!! OMGZ!!!!! The boys have become men.... KYAA!! MORE!!!!

Interesting, Jax is all man now^_^;;

:) Finally managed to fix the connection a little. So, I gotta say the new offspring suprised me. It would really be a nasty thing if X found out that his kids (or well, Skell's - whatever) had been brainwashed into little Orel Wessel soldiers. The thing that sucks most is that I kind of understand Seraphina. If your parents had been killed as a kid, you wolud want revenge, wouldn't you? I like that the character isn't acting evil just because, there are few ppl who are actually pure evil and more often than not, everybody has a reasoning. I still want her punished though :D. Can't wait for the update. Oh and congrats on the publishing! I forgot to tell you in my previous reviews. Hugs, Scarlet

*lol* This Ripley guy is something else. I like him.

So the part where you talk about smelling DNA, I think you mean to talk about Major Histocompatibility Complexes (MHC). I don't know if you want to go into that much detail though... It's just a thought.

Oh and Ripley is cool. He's now my favorite character.

I KNEW HE SHOULDN'T HAVE LET THAT LITTLE GIRL LIVE. I SAID IT BACK THEN THAT SHE WOULD COME AFTER HIM!

thankies for another wonderful chapter!!
hope cake comes out soon!

X consideringly gets the best of the best:)

AWESOME CHAPTER!

Wow...so that little girl wow! I never would have guessed kiix!