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person Mari
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.O
A..another son!? X) Wohoo! I. cannot. wait. to. read. what's. next. A chapter I just drank in as a thirsty one would gulp down fresh water, actually. Loved it!
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
crazy!! i did not expect that!! but it's interesting that some thing else that they had did in the past had come back to kick the brothers in the ass...i can't wait to see what else happens.
person Laur
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooooo brother! damn this ia intense!
person NessaC
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god.... But so if Kain is first-born does he replace Callia as heir to the throne, or does that depend on his genes? hmm
Lots of revelations! :O :O :O
Great chapter! :)

-Spiritxx
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another son. Kain...I had no idea. This seems to be getting more intertwined as we keep going. And Lex having a three-some (or was it four-some) I don't know, then at the end claiming to have girlfriend. Just confusing. So does this make him bi? And I really want to meet this girlfriend. I of course think no one is good enough for Lex, but I have a soft spot. It is great that X and the brothers are finally stepping up and acting like the Emperor they were meant to be. They can't afford to be weak and now they know that they have to be strong not only for themselves but for their family and the whole nation.
Great update, looking forward to the next one!
person Ri
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
T_T How many hardships the brother has to go through before they can be happy. For once in reading stories..i sympathize the character so much that i want a happy ending (while my interest is angsty and dark).You leave us with A LOT of question and doubts...like who this Kain? why lanseng warned not to bring him to the house, 13 children? what'll happen to Lanseng now he has abuse the use of his power, What's Ripley doing? will Ripley be sacrifice?...and so on and so on.
A lot of twist...
Love ur update!

Is this my feeling or u're updating slower than the past few months?but it's fine it's fine...i really satisfied with ur story!

Ri
person Cindyip
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Blink* X has a baby the old-fashion way? Scary...so does that mean this kid is eligible for the throne?:)
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
come on already what taking so long i think im going to die from the wait.
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whats going on how come u haven't updated in a while is every thing alright?
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the relationship of the brotherhood, they are so strong together I almost cried reading about Skell he is so wonderful. He is staying strong for them. I can't wait to read more and find out what happens next. Kiix you are so amazing in the emotional department and I love how you bring your characters to life.
Jewel

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