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This story went from 0 to 185 in like 2.6 seconds. But, one thing I can say is that I do think it's time for X to become accountable for the asshole he once was, and in some ways he still is. Marcus had X dead to rights when he pointed out that his son was 8 years old when he came looking for him. Sucks when you have a know it all right in ya face. Yea, Armor screwed up, but Marcus put X in his place by making him realize the type of individual Armor was way back then. Marcus also had a very valid point of how X expects Armor to be there but has kinda fallen off the schedule the Brothers implemented way back in Carmel. Now the million dollar question is, what is going to come from this MAJOR mindfucking?!?1?!?!

O_____O OMG OMG OMG OMG O M F G ! ! ! What's going to happen?! STOP WITH THE CLIFFHANGERS!! OMGOMGOMG!! =spazz=

i've been with thise story since the begging, it is the best story ever, it has a little of everything
lol, my friend wants the brotherhood to suddenly get a new personality but it would be a female, i thought she was knuts! but i wanted to ask if u thought she was knuts?

OMG!!::screeching here:: just blow my brains out, why don't ya?! Jeez. I'm getting all comfy with X bringing Kain into the fold, well, dragging him into the fold, and then, WHAM! A bitch fight! It gives me a headache.

Great chapter, though. Love the point Marcus made about Kain's first 8 years. Pressing a few guilt buttons on X - ouch. He's got to take some responsibility here. Seems like a few more chats with Kain may be in order. Oh, and how are the other sibs going to take to the new, older addition to the fold? Kain may be a human, but he's still Blood. To turn or not to turn.... Wonder if he's a Blue.... And since X was bitten by a Lycan when he was young, would that effect have transferred to Kain.... Is it a trait in the winglets or would it be recessive because of their mother? It raises all sorts of questions....

Thanks for the new chapter; it was a wonderful read. Eagerly awaiting the next one.....

WTF? Oh shit! what the hell is going on?????

Glad to find another angsty on your story! remind me long time ago with Sex and Claudius! Please update soon,

Ri

Six is a genetically engineered daywalker, Armor is a jealous/covetous bastard, and I think they should go to Jamaica not Mexico.

OMG OMFG!! OMG OMG OMG OMG!! HOW COULD ARMOR KEEP SOMETHING LIKE THIS?!?! HOMG!! HE FREAKIN' BETTER HAS A GOD DAMN GOOD REASON!! and about the beach thing... aren't they vampires? so how can X have a suntan? hmmmm...

Omg. Armor knew???? I knew there was something up when he insisted X tell him he loved him, but... wow.
This new addition to the pod will certainly be very interesting. :) :)

~Spiritxx

Wow, what a chapter. I did love it, I can see Amour back then turning his son away. That was back when Amour was holding X hostage and changing him into what he wanted, what he knew he could be. Selfish yes, wrong yes, understandable . . . at least to me looking out to in yes. Like it was pointed out back then Amour was the man X first got a good look at while he was raping him against a wall, he isn't that person anymore. So much had happened, could Amour have just forgot all about it, so much has happened in their lives over the years and he has had to learn to share the one he loves with so many. Perhaps it is even he figured X didn't know so why bring it up, back then after they first got things going good between them Amour was still the selfish person and even struck X before when he had someone else's scent on him. Amour had not really started to learn to share and deal with his feelings much until X had to marry Claudia and she was pregnant and even then there wasn't a whole lot of sharing, then X was gone all those years. Like X said Amour is not the same person he was back then. Plus even though they are two different personalities Amour and Marcus are cut from the same cloth. Marcus has had his moments in the past, worked back into good gracious and been forgiven. Why not Amour too? Hopefully its all the stress of everything that made X send Amour away right now and it will be worked out. Can't wait to see what happens, hope X doesn't fall into that being an ass mode towards Amour and will calm down and talk with him and hear him out.