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for B E O B I

by Lokizzle

person Meh
schedule November 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sad that it seems this story won't be continued :( I was really digging it. I hope some day you pick it back up!
person Meh
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please please update! I have it bookmarked and i keep comming back but there are no updates. :( Update lots!
person orangemarmaladeontoast
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mmm this story is so sweet, and a welcome respite from all this crazy nightlife city shit everyone is so preoccupied in writing. Keep going pretty pleeaassseeeeee
person Camui
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha, the last time a guy thought I was going to kiss him, I totally stuck my tongue in his nostril.
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I like this story so far though. And though I'm tempted to say "LOLOLOLOLOLBOOBIESROFLROFLZOMGZOR" I'll just leave it at the fact that the names are interesting. Though the times are supposed to be set a few hundred years ago, or even in a different sort of place (kingdoms, farms, blah blah), their slang is quite up-do-date. Though I suppose it keeps the average reader interested, so... no complaints. Even though I'm not the average reader. I'm just doped up on sleeping medication. :P

So I like this story. Mhm. Curious to see what Kit has planned... I hope it's an orgy. 8D

~Cam
person Laie
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's exactly what I'm wondering too...ready for what?
person Kryst Sutures
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea how much I've been looking forward to an update. Beobi is so cute and prudish. XD. He really amuses me, and what's more amusing is how he and Kit interact. Now all I want to know is where they're going! I would be surprised if anything smutty happens soon, this story has a nice slow feel to me. I really like that as opposed to the pointless gratifying porn on this site... Well, sometimes.
person Tee Tee
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's good so far can't wait for the next chapter.
person rose.
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Adorable:) Update when you have time!
person Anon
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOW DO YOU PRONOUNCE HIS NAME?
I KEEP PICTURING BAMBI WHEN I READ THIS STORY FOR SOME ODD REASON...
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
looks like you got more than 5 reviews ^__^ so hurry with the update! it's very good. usually i'm against females trying to steal the main slash character but i love annalisa so far! she sounds so adorable, i just wanna hug her!!! XD *squeeze*