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for Profe *will update soon*

by diebyownhands

schedule February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dude, ur becoming one of my favourite authors! Seriously. Your characters are seabed so inticately that u can't help fall in love with them despite how fucked up they are. Love luciano, love his interaction with his mother particularly, but he is seriously messed up. please please please tell me ur not giving up on this, I've only just discovered it!! It still amazes me how ur not gettin reviews, ppl have obviously not cottoned onto u yet, I must admit, 'profe' is not very catchy for a title. Once u start reading it, u get it but yeh, maybe that's it? Whatever it is, theyr missing out coz ur brilliant. Keep up the good work n the updates :D actually, would u mind emailing me when u update any of ur stories or start a new one? It's lil.miss.gg@hotmail.com
thanks
xx gg
person Daisuke
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hm... interesting. Most of the fics I read like this don't involve a married man, but I like the change. A little extra twist with the angst of the story. Awesome!
person Momo
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol, Carlos is adorable!
He reminds me of a character out of one of Alex Sanchez's books!
This is killing me though, cause im wondering just how complicated things will become!
Please update soon!
person Lindsey
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Keep up with the story, your creating something entertaining and very delicious. I like it. Uriel is so cute and innocent, I think nerdy boys are adorable. Hopefully they get together *fingers crossed* Not too many grammer mistakes and your style of writing was exceptionally well, it allowed the reader to feel as though the were actually inside the story. Nice and interesting plot. Keep up with the fab work. I hope to read what else you have in store for this story. It's one of other stories that I monitor for updates and stuff.

~Lindsey
person YaoiLover
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is great! Can't wait to see what's gonna happen next!
person cant log ; ;
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I... I think I love you. :P This story is GREAT! Can't wait for more.
person Yuu
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MORE...MORE...MORE...MORE...MORE...!!! preety please??? (watery puppy eyes)
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Nice work on the story's plot, it sounds very interesting. Not too many mistakes, Grammar or spelling. Very detailed and written out to where the reader can understand what's going on and get a sense of the story as if they were really there. I think Uriel will make it through, he just has to keep his priorities straight, he'll just have to watch out for Luciano and his perverted thoughts. =) Lovely story really.
Consider me a fan.

~Lindsey Reid