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for Incoherence

by limegreenandtangerine

schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, the angst this is going to cause! It will be deliciously tormenting, and I look forward to it a ridiculous amount...
person InvaderFae
schedule May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and i love the characters. the first one was amazing and the sequal, so far is just as good. But I'm wondering, should I give up on this story? are you ever going to continue it or is it dead? It is really good I hope you continue it would be sad for them to be stuck like that forever. hm anyway I'm going to reread the first one it is very good I love reading them fall in love.
person Sandra
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I love both of your storys about Dain and Riley. Will you keep on writing Incoherence? Pleeeeaaaase, I'm so curious what will happen to the guys.
greetings
Sandra
person Ubikono
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm very glad to read the continuation of "Perseverance" I'm glad to read that both Daiton and Reiley are still together and getting used to the fact that thye are a couple. I'm still upset over the fact that Daitons still has to go through many struggles. He had to grow up so fast and have worries like an adult. I"m very happy to hear that Reailey understands and is finally taking care of Dainton like Dainton should have always been.

The mystery of the unknown boy is finally solved. I wonder if he will come between their love or accept it.........
person BennyPeace
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you ;).
person Rosei
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3.03!

Daint's mom is so mean!!! I know she's sick,
BUT, SHE IS SO MEAN!!!!
It's so hard reading her hurtful words!!!!!
(Too much like home I guess!!!!) HA!

Reilly is such a supportive hunk of cheese!!!!!
Love, love, love those supportive hunks of cheese!!!!

His old friend sounds very interesting and Europe
sounds equally interesting, if not smelly, (and remind
me to never stay in a hostel if I don't have to!!!!!!)

Thanks for the continuing story... and as always-
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You two are the best!!!!!

R
person dutsada
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
After so long! I'm so happy you continued the story~~~~ this is the best New year gift! Thanks for updating! Hope this old friend of Reily's isn't going to cause much trouble though... Happy new year to you... hope the next one will be up soon~~
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
D's mom is a b*h. I know she's sick and all but I can't seem to drum up the sympathy. This Lajah might be an interesting twist. Can't wait to read more.
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm re-reading this story. I love these characters so much. I hope you'll continue their story. I wish I'd know how they coped with school, with visiting Dain's mother and everything else. Honestly, at first sounded like a typical highschool story but after a few lines I've been totally charmed and I read Perseverance without being able to stop. I also loved the fact that it's not an angsty story, in spite of the dramatic situations the characters had to deal with. Maybe it's because the two main characters are so full of love.

Wonderful, wonderful story. It would be such a shame to drop it.
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice round two. Hopefuly they can sort of get there acts together a little moor however they may need to get out of need to do such. Not that I'm complaint or anything. Keep up the good work.