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This story is absolutely fantastic! I read this a few years back and, honestly, I'm really sad that it hasn't been updated. This story and its' predecessor have a fond place in my heart and it makes me sad to not know what happened with Dainton, Reilly, and this new guy Lajah. I need to know, have you guys given up on this story? What's going on? Will you ever update? That sounds really pushy written down but the idea that this will never be finished is absolutely devastating.
SinataRayne

Please finish this. This is truly a good story it would be a shame to leave like this.

Chapter 1. Definitely can't leave the two alone. Gotta know what they do and how it all ends.

Reilly and Dainton are awesome and please please. I know it's too much to ask but please update. Everyday I check to see if there's an update and I know real life is important and all but please will this story ever be completed??

I love where this is going... its like an endurance test haha...but poor them, when all they wanted to do was wrap and bask in each other's warmth... Hope Lajah doesn't take the truth to badly...

Absolutely incredible, as always! I love your boys...they're so messed up and sweet that it's just impossible not to adore them. And you two kick ass together! All of the seriously-yummy sex is a beautiful mix of pure love and serious corruption, which is very difficult to do well, but you always do. And again, I really love how fragile both Reilly and Dainton are -- so completely perfect and necessary for each other, but so unsuited to dealing with the rest of the world (as all good souls are, frankly) that they just go all wonky when something intrudes. I honestly really adore that about them. And the way they can't quite handle things when the other isn't around is lovely. You two torture your beloved characters so well...and then make it all better by letting them complete each other and throwing them into bed for several hours. You rock!

I'm so happy that anew chapter came out! Honestlly I just reread all three chapters a week ago and was craving for more. You guys never fail.

Lajah sounds like an amazing character. Too bad for Dainton whose jealous of the two. But the way I see it (hopefully) Lajah and Reilly are more like broithers who went through a tough time.

As for Reilly he's tense when hes' with DAinton infront of Lajah hmmmm.

I'm very gald to read a new chapter of Incoherence. And happy to see a new line of development! I wish I could write a smarter review, but I just... GUH, I love this story!

Can't wait for more! You guys are awesome!

hey, i'm so happy you keep on writing the story. i love dainton and reilly together, but now it smells like trouble....i'm looking forward for the next chapters ;-)

oh yeah updateeeeee!!! kay this has made my week :D.

i love that you've brought Lajah in, since Perseverance was all Dainton, and now it's a blast from Reiley's past! awesome awesome.