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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is good, but it can be better. It seems as if you sort of rushed it a bit in order to finish it. Slow it down, add more detail, and this would be great!
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You really should think about putting some spaces between your paragraphs to make it easier for readers to read. Not a bad peice, good and simple bdsm. Nice POP.