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for Dreaded Creatures Glide

by spikeface

schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see another update! I love the interactions between Far Seer and Terry as always and it was also cool to see Far Seer reacting to another human as well. I love this story and your style of writing, it's excellent.
person Mitts
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4

Utt ohh. We all know where this is headed, don't we? Terry is going to get busted by the Prince, who's going to have the poor boy thrown in the dungeons for daring to play with the gift of a royal!

Ok, my imagination may be going a little into over-drive here, lol, but.... I'm sure no good is going to come of this, seeing as how the Prince has finally taken an interest in his new 'pet'. And I'm sure Terry is going to be the one made to suffer....

Really good chapter. I like your style of writing...descriptive without being overly so. I'm a lazy reader. I can do without pages and pages of the author telling me exactly what shade of blue the sky was. Keep it up, its a marvellous story...
person barara
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i wonder if terry and far seer are in love.. and if they were to copulate... how the hell would that happen? HAHA i'm a perv XD anyways.. love how its going so far. :D
person Jem
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes! An update! I love this story, I'm so curious to see what happens with the prince now :)
person Anon
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The introduction of Charles has me super curious! I wonder what will happen!

Oh, I know a lot of people ignore this, and I love the fact that you did, but you've made that prince one big snob! And I love it!! It's a characteristic that fits him so perfectly in the way he was brought up and I'm so glad you've made sure that he carried out his true nature. (rather than those stories about some fluffy uke prince that is too naive and considerate for his own good. Damn those character. They aren't /REAL/ like /THESE/ ones.) Even though Charles is a snob, I think I really like that character, even if he is/may become an antagonist.

Sorry I haven't drawn anything to this. I want to. Badly. But I'm a paranoid perfectionist, so the things that don't come up to snuff are never shown. (that last picture I drew yeah... I have three other versions of it!) I've been particularly slow these days. But that's no matter! I can't wait to read more about Kee-Kee, Far Seer, and Charles!
person Sekre
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
They're so cute :) Glad for another chapter.
person Puka
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh so sweet! fer seer is so cute~
person di_sama
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww.... I hope 'Kee-Kee' isn't taken away from Far Seerer if the Prince finds out, 'cause that would suck... anyways, can't wait for another chappy~
person King Coco
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWUH.
;w;

I love Far Seer's relationship with his "Kee-kee" it's simply adorable, the type of friendship they have.
Ooooh, Prince Charlesss. :o
person Mitts
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1

Oh, I've never read a merman story before. I quite like it, lol