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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok I officially hate the freaking prince!!!! EEERRRRRR!!!!! what gives him the right... U know what... eerrrr.... How can u love a story so much and hate it to.... I want them to keep swimming together! And I love how Far Seer is all protective. Yes Im a sucker for those kind of moments. Now Im dieing to see whats going to finaly draw them back togeather. PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE REALLY REALLY SOON!!!!!! I need to know what happens next!!! ((big begging fox kit eyes!!!))
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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg, Kee kee, go back :3
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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
if he's gonna trasform in a human i want his coloration and inked fingers to staaaaaaaaaaay.
well,i can't wait to see what's gonna happen next.
well,i can't wait to see what's gonna happen next.
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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you updated! *dances*.. yay!!
i loved it. i feel a little sorry for far see-er and the way you described him so depressed and lonely made my heart ache..
i also liked the way you made peter crush on terry..aww.
update soon!
i loved it. i feel a little sorry for far see-er and the way you described him so depressed and lonely made my heart ache..
i also liked the way you made peter crush on terry..aww.
update soon!
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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I... want more of this. I'm pretty hooked. Update soon, please!
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March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, now, it's interesting to see that Terry isn't the only one who's managed to survive an encounter with Far Seer. Can't wait to see what you have planned for the Prince...
Also glad Far Seer and Terry are managing to communicate a bit. Language barriers can make it so difficult to form relationships. Those two seem to be taking it in stride, though. ^_^
Also glad Far Seer and Terry are managing to communicate a bit. Language barriers can make it so difficult to form relationships. Those two seem to be taking it in stride, though. ^_^
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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can I stress just how wonderfully this story is going? Just the way u have everyone working with each other is funny, yet real feeling. And the merman being all 'i thought he might have been one of ur friends so i didnt kill him and im glad i didnt' was to funny. The way u had them touching each other, although not sexual, was still breath taking. Now thats talent!
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!!! Another awesome post! :D Seriously, everyday I check to see if this wonderful story has been updated, and finally my wait is over!!!... well, for this chapter anyway XD Now I have to wait for the next one. lol
Love the detail mate ^_^ Kee-Kee and Kia are sooooo cute together!!! I really hope the prince doesn't wreck havoc on their "dates" >< UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love the detail mate ^_^ Kee-Kee and Kia are sooooo cute together!!! I really hope the prince doesn't wreck havoc on their "dates" >< UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am totally ADDICTED to your story. . at first when i read the summary was a little meh about the cleche merman thing.. but wow.. you've totally turned it upside down. the characterisation is perfect. and i like that you didnt make the prince an evil guy.. i love the kai-kee kee ( haha, cute) interactions. i can hardly wait for the update. XD
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm getting to like this story more and more, and Terry and Far Seer. This chapter was my favorite so far, and I see all these possibilties of what comes next.
I got a kick out of Prince Charles and his princely dignity, if he had come on Far Seer before he had a place he was happier, and a friend... well, he'd have found out the lack of respect for royalty. ^-^ (oh, and I had this wierd vision of an elephant curled up at the foot of his bed when he was a child- ha!) So, they play, that was a nice touch. The way you write the merman is so fantastic! If I said that before, sorry, but I am in awe of it. Really, really clear descriptions, that I could just about see him. Likeable, sympathetic and fearsome. I couldn't get enough of reading about him and Terry learning about each other. I wondered though, if the prince gets friendly with Far Seer, how will he react to Terry visiting with his pet? That will be interesting. So many what ifs. Great story, great writing and you have the kind of imagination I'd die to have. More, please.
I got a kick out of Prince Charles and his princely dignity, if he had come on Far Seer before he had a place he was happier, and a friend... well, he'd have found out the lack of respect for royalty. ^-^ (oh, and I had this wierd vision of an elephant curled up at the foot of his bed when he was a child- ha!) So, they play, that was a nice touch. The way you write the merman is so fantastic! If I said that before, sorry, but I am in awe of it. Really, really clear descriptions, that I could just about see him. Likeable, sympathetic and fearsome. I couldn't get enough of reading about him and Terry learning about each other. I wondered though, if the prince gets friendly with Far Seer, how will he react to Terry visiting with his pet? That will be interesting. So many what ifs. Great story, great writing and you have the kind of imagination I'd die to have. More, please.