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I love this story! Too bad you don't update often...T___T

This is one of the most creative slash I've ever read. Far Seer is absolutely adorable as a human just learning words. I'm conflicted as to whether he should stay human or go back to being a merman, but either option would be great. I'm also really interested in the prince's role in this story and his relationship with Far Seer.

Wow! That was a surprise! Haha, damn, I was just reading along and then when there was the whole "he looks down and screams" part my first thought was "oh my god she rotted off his tail" or something *truly* horrible, ya know? But rereading that part it's so easy to translate my horror of him losing his tail altogether to his horror of suddenly seeing bony little strips of legs *in place* of his tail, haha! Did he even realize they were ligs, or had he thought that his tail had just been torn apart? Either way his shock and terror were so relatable, haha, it was a very powerful moment. And the changes to Terry's introduction were very good (especially with the guards out sort of looking for trouble, and mistaking him, instead of the way it was before)! I really kind of find myself liking him even more now, if still, like the other readers, a little annoyed that he wouldn't consider keeping tabs at least on how Kai's doing. And I was really, really hoping Kai would've made the conenction between Charles's altercation with Terry and Terry's disappearance, and proceed to give Charles a few swift kicks to the head (heh, I've never liked him- not only is he the "new guy" compared to Terry, heh, but even his thoughts are snobby and, well, trite. I mean, merman suddenly has legs, and instead of being all like "holy fuck!" the prince is just like "haha, I have the power now!" he just strikes me as one of those guy's who's a jerk inside as well as out. plus, when he's trying to think of how to deal with Terry, his first thought is "killing him isn't an option, not because there are so many other ways to accomplish this, but because hiding the body is way too hard." haha, maybe I'm just being to harsh, but he's got a long way to go before I forgive him for that little bit).

where was I? heh, oh yeah, it was really cool to see into Charles's head, even if he's a prick, haha. still, I'm crossing my fingers in the hopes that Kai quickly regains his strength/courage and beats the tar outta the guy (either literally or figuartively) because the guy really does need to be taken down a notch! it really makes me curious as to how this will all turn out though, it's really very compelling. I love it! especially to see if Charles ever manages to redeem himself or if he kind of stays the bad guy, and if Terry starts to grow a spine again. If I have two little critiques, it's that it sounded like in Five Kai was going to try and find the ocean again, but there's no real mention of people noticing the merman's missing, or actually finding him somewhere else? Or maybe I jsut read that wrong. The second thing (and it may jsut be a personal irritation) is that it seems like you put too much time between visits and scenes and stuff (I mean, two, three weeks and Charles hasn't found an hour to go back? Kai is weighing so heavily on Terry's mind, and even though he could just slip through the gardens again he doesn't?). It's jsut that, for as close as close to the palace/city/living areas and stuff as you make his pool sound, it'd just be way to tempting to hold back too long.

Anyways, that's just me. This is such a great story! I love reading it, thanks for continuing it for so long!

Wow!! This was unexpected!! I really, really, really believed it's not going to be magic in this story... that would be interesting, but it's interesting too know that Far Seer it's human. So, he shouln't be a pet know, but they never will see him like a person, at least that seems. Well, this is getting better, what when Terry knows about this new thing? When they met again? And Charles is all jelousy... Would Kai feel something for him? I want to read more XD
I believe I'd read al your story again when you finish it ^^
See ya!!

Aw, that chapter was so sweet. Hearing the merman try to say Charles' name, was just too cute.

What about Terry though. Will Far Seer forget about him, and lean on the prince for guidence as he comes to terms with his new appendages? If the merman is now encased within the palace walls, what chance does Terry have to come into contact with him again?

It's a bit of a puzzle now, which (if any) of the two, will win Far Seer's heart.

Brilliant update, and looking forward to finding out the answers!

oh no! can he turn back?

omg, an update!! *dances* im so happy! and a LOT happened in this chapter. i like the way you wrote the first part of the chapter... it was almost surreal.

and the merman has legs now! how did that happen? is it temporary or will he go back to normal later? eeee.. i cant wait for the next chapter. update soon~

What a lovely story! I can't wait for more ^^

I absolutely love your story! Kai/Far Seer is so adorable. I didn't expect him to 'grow' legs! That's such a weird plot twist but it's so awesome! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful story. I'm absolutely enthralled when reading it. It's mesmerizing! I feel like I'm a part of their world and a part of Far Seer's world. I really can't wait for the next chapter. I'm sad, though, that Terry hasn't been able to see Far Seer for a while. Stupid Charles. Oh well! I'm sure you've got a nice plan for Terry and Far Seer :)

Well maybe Im just being picky, but now Im sad the mermaid lost his tail... Is he gonna ever get it back? It was another well written chapter, but I feel like a level of kinky-ness has been lost lol. And when is Far Seer going to be back with our far little guy???? Cause I dont like him with the prince. Yes I know Im picky, but I cant help it!.... wait..... Is there gonna b a 3some in here??? Sorry that idea just popped into my head. Well I hope 2 see another update soon! Cause now I REALLY want to know whats happening to the mermaids tail... legs... yeah lol.