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It's beautiful! I loved it. it totally captivated me from the first sentence, and it even inspired me to draw Far Seer ( http://i2.tinypic.com/6kk5yl1.jpg ). I hope you'll post more soon~

Dare I say I've found yet another story without a typical dom/sub, master/pet, story line?! AFF has hit the jack pot I think with writers like you!! I mean, I really don't think our merperson is about roll over and do tricks anytime soon for our dear noble. :) Brilliant! I'm so interested!!!

Oh wow. Very interesting story. I can't wait to find out more about this merman! I love merman fics and this one is really good and well written. The characters are captivating too and it's neat to see the point of view changes in the story. Please update soon--love the long chapters!

CHAPTER 1
Wow, Spike,
Excellent first chapter. Mermen stories are rare and I really like reading them. I liked the beginning and the old seaman, who caught Far Seer while fishing. Really well done. Another thing I like is Far Seer's character and how powerful he is. This story made me think about dolphins in captivity :) Was this in part inspired by them? POV of Far Seer from inside of the pool really got to me.
Waiting for the next chapter!

Aww. He's not dead is he? I'd love to see you continue this. There isn't enough merman slash out there.
But more than likely he's dead. Oh well.

Oh man, this looks excellent! I can't wait for the next chapter (if you continue?). There is really not enough merman slash, so I hope you write more. I'd be very interested to see how anyone will get close with him!

Well done. I hope to see more.