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for Unexpected Outcomes

by JadedNightLover

person RJaneyP
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story with a lot of strange atmosphere...it keeps you guessing where its going next. Make me feel sorry for the bitchy little boy and wonder about his unusual Guardian. G
person Jem
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was a sweet end to the chapter.
It looks good so far, so keep it up! ^^
person Basseygirl
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ive never reviewed a story here before
coz i was too shy
but this is truly amazing
i hope you continue
im curious to see what happens
person irinutza
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i liked it :)
and jade doesn't sound so crazy as i thought by the summary (which is very nice)
waiting for the next one :)