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January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Jade's insanity is showing. Poor kid. Cade is such a bastard to him... You're gorgeous, Jade and you're not fat! *hugs him* I definitely can't wait to see more but man I am in awe at how mean Cade is.
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January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I almost cried at the end there. I really didn't want C. to be such an ass and I hope he comes back. I can't wait to read more and look forward to your next update.
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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start waiting for more!
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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You MUST continue, dammit!
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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I like the sort of confusion you have going with the characters (you don't really know what's happening with J. or how he knows C., why they're leaving, etc...) It all hooked me in. I really hope you chose to continue because this is definitely one I can get into. It's so well written and I'm not sure how much better it is in your mind, but I thought what you posted here was fantastic.
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gud start
its interesting and id like to read more so update soon!!!!
its interesting and id like to read more so update soon!!!!
schedule
December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gud start
its interesting and id like to read more so update soon!!!!
its interesting and id like to read more so update soon!!!!
schedule
December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this, you just have to explain your characters more and their relationship.
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this a lot so far. Jade's so cute, in a mental kind of way. Besides a few mistakes this story has a lot of potential. Update soon?
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Please continue!!
Characters are sexy and complicated and I like your writing style!!!
Now, I must get back to my revisions!!!
Hope to find another chapter some day. I wil keep looking!
Thanks,
R
Characters are sexy and complicated and I like your writing style!!!
Now, I must get back to my revisions!!!
Hope to find another chapter some day. I wil keep looking!
Thanks,
R