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for Unexpected Outcomes

by JadedNightLover

schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I could wait until May to get the whole ch 4 and I prefer option C. I kind of thought that was where you were going with it with that scene of all three of them together hugging. I also figured he was his brother since the second ch.
person Sapphire
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CCCC!!! definetly C lol then everybody's happy ^-^
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First of all: I adore this story. Some parts get a bit confusing, but I love it

And I wouldn't mind waiting, so long as there's promise of the next chapter. Also, JadeCadeRio sounds awesome (I'm a big fan of threesomes) but I wouldn't mind if the pairing's different
person Anon
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
only cade and jade čpairing interests me,and i would rather see a whole unrushed quality chapter.
when you dance with your muse,of course.
there's no rush.
person Basseygirl
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
don't worry about it
just take your time
it's well worth the wait
:D
person Kryst Sutures
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(This is Mr. Nice Girl. Finally registered.)

Yeah you know I love this story. This update has made me have to take my heart medication. Brothers?! BROTHERS?! Well. I like incest but Jade doesn't seem to appreciate it. XD. Can't wait until you update next. You've got me on the edge of my seat.
person Basseygirl
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG LOL
this chapter was everything i expected and more
Cade's his brother??
wow im so excited to see what happens
lol i can think of a million questions to ask
but i dont want to ruin the suprise for myself
*squeal*
its just so well written, the descriptions and everything is just so detailed and vivid.
the insight into Jade's mind is just breath taking
keep going your doing soooo well
cant wait till the next chapter
person BennyPeace
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I like this story a lot, and while I could tell that this was unbetaed, nothing really stood out too horribly. But now I have tons of questions that need to be answered too! Ahh, I'll be waiting for you to update.
person Aleks
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are you kidding it´s very good!

Cade didn´t leave forever??? Personally I don´t think so but you´re writing.... :)

Waiting for more!
person Basseygirl
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg you updated
im so happy!
*squeak*
this fic just keeps getting better and better
you use all the right words
i can just imagine the story playing like a movie
lol
im getting all excited now
i totally cannot wait till the next chapter.
till next time!