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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really well written, and very erotic.
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why did he rape her? I know it's a dumb question, but was it done out of love for her, to have her?? will you continue with this story?
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, that was seriously hot. Now, I'm not one for the 'She gets raped but starts liking it' ideas, but it seemed to fit for this. I did notice some mistakes in grammer, but as you said, it isnt one of your better works. I would love to see this continued if you should decide to.
Overall, I give it a 4.5 out of five. Good job!!!
Overall, I give it a 4.5 out of five. Good job!!!