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by Kiira

person Sie
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
D:!!!! poor joni, for some reason i have this sneaky feeling that you're going to make it so that chris some how gets out and goes after joni again.
person JulesGer
schedule October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
huhu,
yeahhh an update:)
finally the big secret is out,that was a big step in Joni`s healing prozess!
I`m feeling very sorry for Adam,that bastard Chris is his friend,and I guess
he will not stay to his word and will continue to visit ore contact him...
His wife is right,it`s awful what happend to Chris in the past,but that doesn`t justify
anything!
And I fear for Joni,Chris is really ill and so obsessed about him...arrgh
Misha?Micah?(shit forgot the name)Vodka has to stay at his site all the time!
And please find someone for Ivo,he is such a sweety:)
Greetings,Jules
person Divane
schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea how awesome this story is *_* . I would looove to see next chaps appear faster, please <333
person cricri
schedule August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
after so long i battle with my addiction, now i think i'm able to back on track....hm.....3 chapters in a row, how nice,
although i don't think he's suffering enough, my author highness....huahahahahha!!
person Jay
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I really tried to enjoy your story, and give it the benefit to the doubt, but in the end I find it quite unrealistic. You main character shifts from this annoying and vain character to the victim and to be honest, found it very difficult to sympathize with his situation. Maybe I'm just an asshole, but your quick transition of more than 2 years was not done well. Also, the abusiveness of Chris seems so random and sudden, although I guess you tried to foreshadow it before when he wouldn't want to talk about his family. I'm very disappointed in the progression of the story and I can't believe I spent 20+ chapters waiting for something better. I wish you luck in your future writing.
person Bo
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am glad Misha is taking such good care of Joni. I understand all of Joni's worries and hesitantion but I am looking forward to them working it out together.
person JulesGer
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
huhu
oh,now that was really a sweet chapter...:)
Misha and Joni are so cute together.But there
is these evil cloud above their heads.Chris is such a
bastard,trying to blame Misha...grrr
I hope Misha and Ivo are able to protect Joni,he needs it for sure!
Please update soon,Jules
person Bo
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am glad Misha is taking such good care of Joni and Joni and his father are regaining their former relationship.
I am really happy that Adam told Chris how it is and didn't beat around the bush. Chris shouldn't be coddled for what he has done.
I hope Misha and Joni's relationship will go ever further after Joni has healed and anything Chris does won't matter.
person JulesGer
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
huhu,
omg,Chris is so fucked up in the head,I bet he will try to escape...
I hope Misha and Ivo will keep Joni safe.Misha is so sweet,he cares about Joni
so much,and he is doing a great job,feeding him,that was so cute!
And then the visit from Asko,I had tears in my eyes.Joni should really tell
them all about the pictures,because it`s such a burden for him!
Can`t wait to read what happens next!
Greetings,Jules
person kylee123
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a story. There is so much emotion and so many points of views to be considered. Joni is still afraid to tell about the pictures but he needs to get that off his chest. He is already at rockbottom. If he really wants to try a relationship with Misha, he needs to come clean and start on the right footing. And also with his poor confused Dad. Everything his Dad thought was correct is turning out to be wrong. Joni owes his Dad an explanation of how things went wrong.