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by Kiira

person kylee123
schedule July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for your special Thanks Kolgrim. I think it is cute to see Misha being so worried and protective about Joni. He just has to try to not get on Joni's nerves. I love Ivo and Sami too. I am eager to see what Misha has planned for Joni's 20th birthday. It is good that Joni is starting to get more concerned about his appearance and such. It shows that he is getting better. Hope to see the next chapter soon.
person Lisa
schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good job Joni for setting up Ivo with Jami. Maybe we will have too happy couples at the end ot the story.
person kylee123
schedule May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter Kolgrim. I don't know how I missed it when it was posted. You do such a good job of presenting all the viewpoints in the story. I am so happy that Misha has finally confessed to Joni or rather to a closed door. Finally after all these years of wasted time, they can start to build a life together. I realize that is really is a big thing for Misha to admit his feelings - so I expect that he finallyis ready to step up and be Joni's lover and partner. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.
person Koira
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
...and tell Carita that I'm delighted :)
person kylee123
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Thanks for the new chapter. I enjoyed the end of Misha's story about Foxy and the White Wolf. If only Misha and Joni could be brave enough to truly talk about things. I hope Joni got the hint that Misha wants to be with him. If only Misha would stop running away everytime they get close to talking about their relationship. I think Cecelia's advice was right on the money. I believe that Chris still loves Joni but unfortunately his love has become a corrupted obsession and there is no way for it to be fixed. They need to stay away from each other if they want any hope for healing and moving on with their lives. I hope Chris will be able to realize this. Right now he seems torn between anger and guilt. I still feel for Chris and I wish he could move towards a positive future for himself. I hope Adam will help Chris to go home to Canada and to start a new life.
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Adam, don't be a f***ing idiot! I hope White will be able to protect Foxy from the evil Creep. I really hope Creep rots in jail. White should just admit that he likes Foxy. I'm certain he knows that Foxy likes him back. If White can't find the guts to confess, Foxy should just say something so they can finally get somewhere.
person Kata
schedule December 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Too tired to write anything clever. Yes it was a long wait but worth it. I wanna know what happens at Misha's story! ;)

Love,
Kata
person Cindyip
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh Misha, thank goodness you are there. Asko, glad you opened your eyes:)
schedule December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have written a wonderful story with great insight into how and act on those feelings. I'm terribly afraid that we have not seen the last of Chris, he has fixated on Joni now and its unlikely that he will be put in jail for a very long time. I would have expected Joni to have been a bit more afraid of Chris finding out what he was doing, but then he had a very strong character. I hope that you update quickly as I will be waiting to read more.
person kylee123
schedule December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hurray for the new chapter! How could Misha not finish the story? So cruel! It seems Misha is feeling nervous about finally admitting his feelings for Joni. I am glad that Joni has finally told his secret to his parents. They are definitely going to need a united front when it is finally time to deal with Chris.