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Fantastic, as always. It's simply stunning how you can sort each personality, and they don't mesh together like I've seen many times. It seems so well set, and I can see their development as the plot continues. It's by far one of the most intriguing stories I've read in a very, very long time. Misha is so funny, Even without meaning to be. Joni is just adorable, even when he's not trying to be. The list, THE LIST made me laugh so hard. Ivo is my favorite character in this story though. I think it's because he's just a goofball. xD
A loyal reader,
TC

This is an awesome chapter! It really feels authentic, like slow and steady (and supportive) is exactly what Joni needs. Oh, and communication is always helpful! :) Apart from "sparing the golf instructors," my favorite line is: “As your trainer, I must insist that you include healthy carbohydrates in your diet...” So great! Just an example of how much Misha "gets" Joni. He's barely smoothed over Joni's upset at the food ordering and convinced Joni to let him help with training. And then, bam, he works it in as a professional recommendation. So cute.

Still loving this story. Thanks for the speedy updates. I'm dreading the trial, but glad that Joni is working through his issues and making plans for the future, completely separate from whatever happens with Chris...who I still hope gets deported & maybe dumped outta the plane while it's over the Atlantic. ^_^

what a lovely date filled with progress. and i would love a oneshot with Ivo's date if you ever feel the inspiration. also even though markus is kind of stalkerish sounding i liked you adding that element and how markus' behavior had joni questioning his perceptions - i feel it's important to your story that things aren't cut and dry or easy - especially with the impending trial and the date was fluffy enough to wash away any nasty feelings left over from markus. good job.

wooh! this was a happy little chapter! :D it was really cute and i enjoyed seeing joni and misha in this kind of "new" relationship! its adorable! hahah! cant wait for the next one!

Hmm....idk what to say,i dont want to be mean,i enjoyed ur story ,but i think it s time to make the 'the end' . It s already too much,Joni plays hard to get and from what i read u want to add Markus ,and i m sure (and i dont think im the only one who thinks so) that i will stop reading it .

:)

I love this story and I have been following it since all the way in beginning but now I just want everything to be resolved and have the happily ever after. I feel as tired as Joni just reading about his tiredness. Mark needs to gtfo. Seriously. No more boys, just a man.. and that is Misha

So two chapters to review. I love that Joni talked to Misha and I like that he has a list of things that he wants in a persona and as a person. His friend from the Army gave me the creeps. It's good that Joni doesn't like him like that. I can't wait for the date with Misha, if I can call it that.

I think that you make Misha out to be the bad person in this story to much. He may not always make the right choices but he was only trying to take things slow with J. You make it like J can do no wrong and that being childish is something to be proud of. You also make it as if Misha cant find anyone else to be with. Most if not all of this story has been Misha chacing J. I dont think that you are being fare to Misha. I also think that J needs to do alot of growing up and needs to work for Misha for once. He has played alot of childish games and you act like that is a good thing. I also think that you should stop having Misha's brothers always against him.

hahaha! totally loved the idea that markus could be a golfer! xD loved the update! youre doing an amazing job! cant wait for the next one! i miss ivo and jamie! ;D hint hint! hahaha!

Great chapter. Joni is slowly figuring things out and having time to heal. I love the idea of a protective hamster, lol! Misha is a little too convinced that he knows best, it would be awesome to see golf kicking his ass (as in, something he couldn't do). Totally funny that he hopes to compromise with mini-golf. Something tells me Joni won't go for that. :)

Thanks for the fast updates! Keep up the great work. These characters are awesome & I'm getting a whole new appreciation for Joni's folks, which is nice.