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by Kiira

schedule April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Come on Come on I m hoping so badly that Chris gets what he deserves.

Great chapter it's good to see Joni taking the correct steps to healing.SQL
person cricri
schedule March 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well, you will never get even a single angry review from me, my author highness
but actually i can understand how's johny's feeling, the anger, the humiliation, and most of all the fear
i hope everything will turn out okay for him.....NOT!!...*LOL....evil chuckles*
schedule March 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That Chris needs to be taught a lesson! I don't care if he is crazy or anything, he needs to realize how fucked he really is.

Sorry for my ranting. You have a wonderful story that really makes me hate abusive partners and rapists.
person YACUMO
schedule March 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Long time no see.
Nice chapter, just one question though...
WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO MAKE THAT MOTHER FU$%%& PAY!!!
Thanks for updaating dear. I hope to read from you soon.
person cricri
schedule March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
soooo cute! Misha's finally showing his soft side, who would've known?
don't take to long johni, or chris will get out of jail and take you first....HAHAHAHAHAHA!! *evil grin*
miss you my author highness.....
person amoxi
schedule February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed reading Foolish Games since quite some time now. I was always too lazy to review though. However this time around I just wanted to show you something of which you maybe weren't aware of when you wrote this chapter. What resulted is kinda a creepy irony you surely didn't intend.

It's about when Misha and Joni spoke about moving away from Finland, more exactly the following part: “Somewhere warm… Jamaica?” He snickered imagining them sitting at a beach somewhere with rainbow hats on, smoking weed, drinking rum and speaking in funny accent and listening to reggae music, quite stereotypical…

And here are some informative links on Jamaica's politics concerning the homosexuals in their society:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/LGBT_rights_in_Jamaica
http://www.time.com/time/world/article/0,8599,1182991,00.html

As you can see, Jamaica is considered one of the places where nobody would want to be queer. Anal intercourse between men is forbidden by law and sentenced with up to 10 years and forced labor camp. Homosexuals can also more or less be openly murdered and nobody would do something against it, the police as well most often won't even punish the aggressors.

So yeah, Misha and Joni should rather go looking for another Caribbean island if they are so keen on some warmth, or how about the Maldives?
person Cindyip
schedule January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am with Dima, can totally see Misha and Joni old in a retirement home arguing over Misha's missing teeth:)
person Bo
schedule January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes! The last two chapters were so refreshing. I missed this sooo much!
I hope their relationship continues to grow innocently and then they will truly fall in love
:mushes:
person Noir Genesis
schedule December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg five odd new chapters since i was here last ooooh bby!

i voted rot in jail btw

but i wished their was a hope chris gets raped in prison option ahhh a girl can dream right? XDDD
person MayoRose
schedule December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hahaha! this chapter was adorable! and you get 100 points for including my favorite movies of ALL time! xD but i would of love Aragorn and Legolas together! beautiful men deserve to be together! ;D hahahah! super adorable development! innocent but with a pinch of sexuality, nice! hahahah! :D cant wait for the next one! youre amazing!!!