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by Kiira

person Kata
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pidin, erittäin paljon! Täytyy sanoa, että minullekin jäi iso hymy naamaan tämän osan jälkeen. Ehkä pojilla on toivoa? Toivon todella niin, pidän onnellisista lopuista. Ihanat hahmot, mielenkiintoinen tarina. Jään odottamaan jatkoa hymy naamallani ;-)
person Cindyip
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*blink* Joni was a virgin? ...wow^_^
person Kata
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Toivottavasti jatkat pian, mielenkiintoinen tarina ;-)
person Wolfy
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Liking it so far, but one thing is bugging me: Misha and Mikael. Not the characters themselves, the names. Misha is a diminutive of Mikael. It's not really a name to itself. Well, at least in Russian. So they basically have the same name. Which confuses me. And what country are they in? I didn't quite get it...
person papu
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cuuute XD please give me more, i absolutely love this story and your writing flows so well. the tone aomhow manqged to be slightly creepy and i like that, it's like a signature.
person Cindyip
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Misha now go save your poor Joni:)
person Lonley_Mistress
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHA!!! I so felt that for Misha. What could be more embarrassing...well, I know of another situation that rivals it :P But that's not the point :P
I can't wait to see what Misha has in store for Joni. XD
person Mr. Nice Girl
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh hell yes! I like this a lot. I wonder what he has in store for Joni... He isn't sexually attracted to him, or so he claims, so what could he possibly be thinking of? Update soon! I want to see more of this. I just love Ivo. The dildo saga was hilarious.
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 2
Hi Kolgrim,
Just read both chapters and proloque. I really like this story! It's pretty cool that you write AUs about my favorite characters. I like the fact that they are younger. Isn't it funny that Misha thinks himself to be so mature, when he is only four years older than Joni. Joni is going to get him, hehe!
What kind of a name is Ivo? Is he Misha's half or full brother?

So far this fic is cute and all characters read as real people; things flow very naturally. Good job :)

Merry Xmas!
person Cindyip
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ivo is far wiser than his years *smirk* matchmaker anyone:)