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by Kiira

person Mr. Nice Girl
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear. Poor Joni. At least have a rebound you're attracted to! I kind of liked Kasper at first but after what he did, he's such an asshole. I wish Joni and Misha would stop being so silly... Especially since Joni seems to think leading horny guys on will make things better! Teenagers. Update soon! I love this story with all my heart.
person Koira
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, I like ^.^

This is probably weird, but: thank you for the "4 km walk." Let's face it - Americans and British people have a real monopoly on this website, and they corrupt everyone with miles and gallons -.-
Metric system for president. =p
Koira
person cricri
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw...poor Joni...he's so confused....and Misha's not helping either...
Stepmother is nice....try to help....
Update soon, please...author highness...!!!
person traxie
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Moi, kirjottelen nyt suomeks sitte ku molemmat kerran suomalaisia ollaan;) mahtava tarina, oon tykänny kaikista sun tarinoista tähän asti:D itseasiassa sun takia tänne AFFn oon alunperin eksynyki, kiitos Silent-tarinan. En muista mistä sitä ensin luin mutta sitten sun omilta kotisivuilta ja lopulta sitten täältä. jatka samaan malliin, misha on yks mun lempihahmoista ja tykkään jonistakin enemmän ku se on mishan kanssa:DD
person Natha
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello Kolgrim!

I promised I'd review but you beat me and published a new chapter before I could make it. Well, I'm a lazy ass... *shrugs*

I like the story. But I think it's redundant to tell because otherwise I wouldn't review, would I? ;-) Your characters are lively and so well formed, that I can imagine them in real life. With all their pros and cons...

For instance Misha's stubborness and his feeling of being superior to Joni. Though Joni's a brat. Kinda the typical teenager when graced with good looks - cocky attitude and thinking the world lays down to their feet. Adorable, though I feel sorry for his stepmother - his attitude towards her is fierce.

Anyway, I hope they're not moping around too long and start realizing what they feel for each other - whatever it is. And sort out things and get it on! :D

Greetings
Nathaniel
person Mr. Nice Girl
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Joni and his attitude... That kid is something else. Ah well, he's in pain now, physically and emotionally, so I guess he's going to be bitchier than usual. I really shouldn't be thinking of Ivo/Joni so much...XD. Anyways post more soon! Love this story so much
person Cindyip
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Joni you can be such a ass, your stepmother was just trying to help(^_^)
person cricri
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow....and I here I thought that smoked ham is the best.......this story turned out to be more yummy and delicious.....hihi...
person Mr. Nice Girl
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow... That was unexpected. I hope Mischa doesn't flip in the morning when he realises what he's done! I love this story so much... You rule.
person Irrlich
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that was strangely sweet.
Heh, now i got a big goofy grin on me face, along with a dull trob in me loins XP
can't wait to see what the morning after will be like XD