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by Kiira

person Koira
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sure it does :)
koira@gmx.net, write anytime, it's tax deductable. lol.
Oh, and the chapter was cute. Seems like a filler, but oh well. You need those, too. =)
person Saminada
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! AWESOME UPDATE!!! I just loooooooooooooved it!!!
Everyone was shocked to hear they went out together! Hahahaha I just hope that Joni's father wont find out... 'cause I know he wont like this one bit!! >_<
Anyways, I wonder how everything will go from here? Will Ivo's plans explode in his own face? hummm
Man,thanks alot for the update! *hugs* Can't wait for more! ^^
person Cindyip
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ivo, I like your evil little mind(^_^)
person Anon
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow! this chapter was hilarious!
ASOTA
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Misha sure is stubborn..lol i wonder when hes gonns give in? anyways..i love where this is goong..keep the good work! Thank so much for updating, Im looking forward to your next chapter..take care. 8D
person cricri
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hei Eva!!, leave poor Jony alone, you bitch!!! *pant pant*
aw.....misha's sooooooooooo jealous, he's cute!!
jony with sore muscle??? which muscle??...hihihi
he was soooo naughty, playing games with ivo eh....??
i think he deserves some spanking....and some f$&#ing....*evil grins*
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, can't wait for the next part.
person Saminada
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh! Nice update!!! It was great!
And the end made me wonder if Joni really did sleep with Ivo or not?? It could only sound like it was the case right?? lol I hope they did Not do it!! >< ...Poor Misha! T__T

Anyways, I can't wait to know what really happened between Joni and Ivo.
Thanks alot for the update! *hugs*
person Natha
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello Kolgrim!

Two new chapters - well, at least for me, I kinda missed the last update.

And what an update it was. A confused and somewhat hurt Joni being an asshole (at least to some extent) and getting himself hurt more. Kaspar as sure wasn't a gentleman or boyfriend when he didn't stop so they are kinda even. Though Kaspar seems to really be head over heels for our good looking protagonist and that's why I feel sorry for him. But hey, you can send him over, I have lots of German metal music here, so I'm sure I can... console him *grins*

I hope Ivo's plan is going to work, but I'm not so sure. I doubt that he slept with Joni (though you never know of course...) but perhaps thinking that makes Misha realize some things. We'll see - hopefully soon ;-)!

So, I'm anxious to read what's going to happen! So shoo and write me more. I need more!!! *laughs* Nah, you know what I mean :-)
Nathaniel
person Katariina
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Siis sinä hirveä hirveä ihminen! Ei suinkaan! ;D

Aivan ihana osa! Pidän kovasti tämän kaltaisesta mustasukkaisuudesta, tuo ihanaa maustetta tarinaan ;) Todella mukava osa!

Anteeksi, olen aika huono tuomaan ajatuksiani ilmi. Halusin kuitenkin kertoa, että pidän edelleen ja seuraan Suurella Mielenkiinnolla :)