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by Kiira

schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As usual your work is amazing. Keep it up! I loved that scene with Joni and Kasper. I was wondering if he would hurt Joni too. I hope JOni is alright ad I hope Misha comes to his sense soon too!
person Cindyip
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Kasper, you are a bastard. Being drunk doesn't make you guiltless when you act like that:(
person Koira
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that Kasper is back. Or well, not glad per se but there were things unsaid and unfinished. It's better now.
And the babysitting part made me go "awww"...
person papu
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
my tear ducts are sweating. i need more.... if i was pinkish i'd have an upper cheek blush.
person Kryst Sutures
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Kasper's really hurt. But he said some seriously terrible things. And I feel bad about getting turned on at the getting taken by both of them at the same time thing lol! Poor Joni. That's never an easy thing to hear... even though well... He is a bit...promiscuous but I wouldn't call him a whore yet... XD. At least Mischa seems to be realising that he wants Joni. Slowly. God, continue soon! I missed this.
person papu
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you tease. update already
person cricri
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
uaahhhh!!!
Ivo and Johni's been naughty naughty....and tricky tricky.....and horny horny....hihi
soooooooooo, they're not gonna screw each other like wabit????
well, maybe later i'll find more juicy stuff, and...please hurt johni a wittle (i can't help myself)
miss you too.....i'll online soon....*hugs hugs hugs....kiss kiss kiss*
person ChibiBerry
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL..jealousy is so funny to see...misha will have to give in eventually. thnx for updating, i cant wait for ur next chapter..take care. 8D
person Natha
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello Kolgrim!

Thumbs up! Nice chapter. I especially liked many things Dima was saying - you have to give him credits for some good insight (especially at his age). Ivo's still the plotting matchmaker but you're right: Misha is stubborn - bullheaded would be more accurate :-) So I'm anxious to see what it takes Ivo and Joni to do to at least get Misha starting to go for Joni. But then Joni has to admit his attraction for Misha, too... I can see a lot of stuff coming our way :D

Oh and I still check my mailbox for Kasper everyday XD

Greetings and such
Nathaniel
person Kryst Sutures
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mischa is so jealous right now! I love it. XD. If only he would realise that he has feelings for everyone's favourite model. Poor Dima. He's in an odd situation. But I still kind of like Ivo and Joni together; they're so cute! And it seems like Ivo is starting to become a bit taken by Joni? Ooooh. This story never fails to get more and more interesting.