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by Kiira

schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow..this chpater was fun to read! Though..for some reason, I don't really like Chris, I think he's an asshole...oh well. But thank you for updating, I really enjoyed reading this chapter..and now I can't wait to see hwta happens next! I'm looking forward to your next update, keep up the great work. The story is wonderful so far! 8D
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Misha back! Please? Don't like Chris and Joni is being so....naive. Good story love it.
person romanticfae
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chappie very HOTTT!!!
person Cindyip
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Stop right there Chris, Joni belongs to Misha>.<
person cricri
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
soooooooooooo, it's chris the boxer, eh...? i knew how much you loooooooooove meeeee, so that you won't dissapoint me.....hehehe...can't wait for your next chapter....take that mischa!!
person Lonley_Mistress
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Joni, I know how he feels. I wonder what this Chris character is up to...
person Kryst Sutures
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update! I missed this like crazy. It seems like Joni will manage to get himself into trouble even in a 'safe' place... *sigh* That boy is so hard-headed and ill-tempered and immature. He's heading down a strange path. I hope he comes to his senses. But I completely understand his flawed, rebellious teenage logic. Can't wait to see how this goes!
person romanticfae
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's good
person Natha
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello Kolgrim!

As I thought, you wouldn't make things easy or as I liked them to be. Well, I am not surprised.

Asko's a little too oldfashioned. Too much from his father I'd say. “Alright Joni, if you were straight we probably wouldn’t, no woman can hurt you like another man can.” This statement made me laugh. Hard. I mean, Finland isn't in another dimension, right? Or are the women in your country completely different than normal ones? No woman can't hurt you like another man... *shakes his head* Really, Asko's not very realistic... I'm not sure if he'd lost Joni somewhat with this decision or at least damaged their relationship, though Joni seems to have already forgiven him.

Oh and the coincidence, Joni got send away so he doesn't have any temptation around him and then an attractive Canadian queer guy arrives in this middle of nowhere. And come on, what do you do, when there's nothing to do, the days get shorter, the nights longer and its getting cold. *grins* Well, I'd now what to do against the boredom and cold for sure...

No Misha for some chapters? That's a pity but perhaps it will make him think. I guess we're seeing more of Chris instead of Misha then... Oh and Misha should to a lot of sucking with Joni - the earlier the better! *smirks*

You love my reviews? Does that mean I can stop smiling charmingly at the end of them to get on your good side? *sticks out his tongue at you and laughs* Anyway, I like to review this story, because it's a great one! *nods*

Hope to read more soon!
Nathaniel

p.s.: I know this chapter is unbeta'd but perhaps you want to change this sentence: "“A Russian!” He humped, shaking his head." I don't think Joni's grandpa is humping something while driving and chiding Joni for being gay. Though it's an interesting mental image... *winks*
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay..an update! I'm so glad there was another chapter added, I really enoed reading it. I think it wil be fun if Joni gets together with Chris...it will piss of his Dad and make Misha jealous..lol. Anyways, thanx for updating, I can't wait to read more. You're doing great, so I'm looking forward to ur next chappie. 8D