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by Kiira

schedule October 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for fixing the chapters so I didn't have to side scroll! It had been so long since I read it that I decided to start over, and I'm glad I did. I read four chapters so far.

The way Mischa fights his attraction is definitely amusing! I laughed out loud when Joni found the hoard of sex toys and they had their little argument about Mischa's size. LOL again just thinking about it.

And so cute the way Mischa rescues Joni at the club. Your build up of their relationship and their personalities is as always wonderful, and although this doesn't have the lovely angst of Michael' story, I am enjoying it, as I always enjoy your stories. :)

~Kaydy

person perkazy
schedule October 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for continuing to write this story. I can't wait to see how it turns out!
schedule October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi Kolgrim! Wow, you've added so many chapters to this story! I had a problem reading it though, the line at the bottom stretches the page out too much. Anyway, it was good to see both of our stories together like back in the day. :)

I would love to read this, but if you don't mind, the long unbroken lines need to be shortened so I don't have to scroll. I'm lazy. *hug* kaydy
person Cindyip
schedule October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Always one of my favorite couples
schedule August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Joni - the beating will only aggravate Chris further, unstable and resentful as he is.
person Skye
schedule July 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just found your story and haven't been able to stop reading! It is so amazing! Please update soon! :D
person Cindyip
schedule May 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Asko, he is a good father, not perfect but there is no such thing as perfection.
schedule May 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad to see Joni and Misha getting to a more confident place in their relationship. They deserve it.

And I am still waiting for Chris to get a good dose of his own medicine.
person Anon
schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hire a hit man and kill off cris!
person YACUMO
schedule April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like you each time more and more :).
Nice chapter. I am not flamming any non con here if..... C is involved in it...and preferably a gang kind of thing by the way!!
LOL
Anyways nice chapter and thanks for updating.