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by Kiira

schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh and is Mishia coming back? I can't wiat to see if there is a meeting between the three.
person riokali
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
could u just tell me how u plan joni to be in the future coz he's turning into a little nymph and i'd pictured him pining for misha throughout the fic.
person aki
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story most out of all your stories. I can't wait for Misha and Chris to meet. Btw can u kill Chriss off??

Or Make it so he acidently gets castrated?

Love ya please update soon XOXO
person Cindyip
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Joni, your father is going to die of heart failure cause of your tactic:P
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
September 12th is my birthday =D lol
person Kryst Sutures
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Joni... What to do with that boy? He's something else! I'm enjoying all the sexing going on. But I'm kind of wondering how it's all going to go down when he runs into Mischa again... Especially with Chris hanging around. Everyone's going to think he's a whore now... XD. Poor kid. Growing up is tough when you're a sexy spoilt brat.
person Lonley_Mistress
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You updated :D Sorry you haven't really heard from me that much, been very busy. Loved this chapter! The sex scene was sooo hot, and well, I can't wait to see what happens if Joni decides to leave the country with Chis. *wonders if Chris has a darker side* Ah well, if he does, the story will get even more interesting! :D
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, another chapter! Joni really is so naive, I think he still has a lot of growing up to..still I'm mad his father right now. Because you left it at such a good part, now I can't wait to read more. Please update, This is getting way too interetsing. 8D
person naviarex
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so entertaining. Joni is so endearing and infuriating at the same time. I love the drama and can't wait for the next "accidents" hehehe.
person Natha
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello Kolgrim!

I don't know, I wasn't too happy with this chapter. Not that it's written bad, I just don't really like what happened...

I don't like that Joni's dad is downright naive and stupid. Hopefully he's better with his other kids when they hit Joni's age. Even though he wants the best for his son, he's so... Gnah!

I don't like Joni's grandpa also. I mean, respect for you elders is good, but it's not that important!

I still don't like Chris. And I don't like the sex he was having with Joni. Because it lacked what good sex (in my opinion) should always have: Passion. But okay, Joni likes Chris and he seemed to like the sex, so it's fine for him and it's what you get for having sex just to anger someone else.

It seems I don't like much in this chapter - which doesn't mean it's a bad one. I just am not jumping in joy with the smut (and that says something) because Chris (well, and Joni) screwed it up...

*smiles and shrugs* I still love the story and your style, so I hope I didn't anger you with my comments. Oh and I detected a weird tendency of women, who are writing slash, to enjoy annoying their characters. You think your characters enjoy it, too? Think about it! *nods*

I'm waiting for the next chapter to see in what trouble Joni gets himself then... *waves*
Natha