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person kylee
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. Rape is a difficult subject but it does happen. Chris has become taken over by insecurity. I personally hope that Joni finds the strength to deal with Chris on his own. That is what I would wish for myself in a situation like that. I think he is realizing that Chris is a basket case and that he cannot live like a prisoner for the rest of his life.
person Bo
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow; Misha and Joni's relationship seems to be changing.
I really hope they are meant to be by the end...even though Chris was formly one of my favorite characters
he is slowly but surely losing his charm.
I never realized how wonderful Dima really was until this chapter; he is such a loyal friend.
Ivo is quite funny.
person NightRoseFox
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, honestly if Dima doesn't figure this out soon, and get his brothers and Joni's dad there to kick that ass wipes ass all over finland then I am never reading this story again. Misha should be the one to do it since he's the one that started Joni's downward spiral, and it would be fitting to have that hot, bigg ass russian taking down that pathedic little canadian. I have never read a story where it actually made me pissed for it to be so damn ansty, but I seriously can not stand spousal abuse of any kind. Sad isn't it, the rape wasn't what pissed me off the most, it was the whole "you belong to me, let me beat that into you", that really got me. I'm glad also that you put it in there because alot of people think tat that stuff only happens in M/F relationships, and that guys aren't that abusive towards other males, or girls aren't that abusive towards other girls. It's still a common missconception. Any way I look forward to the next chapter and the hopefull ass kicking of that possessive ass wipe.
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Can Joni please go police on Chris' ass? or at least let Misha (and Ivo) get some good bashing in!

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person Edaj
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im really enjoying your story and how Joni's live is being twisted around
Im being serious these last few chapters are making me cry!!
I want Joni to get out of there!
Misha should come to save the day!! Or Dima or Ivo but mostly Misha!!
Please let him get out of there soon!!
person cricri
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG............OMG.....!!! he finally did it!!......well, at least he's still being considerate johny....he was using lube....right?? *evil bitch snickers*
person kylee
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would like to know if Chris has issues from his past that have caused him to go so crazy with jealousy.
person Bo
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so pissed! Chris completely changed from the guy that he used to be.
This goes to show that sometimes people are just not meant for eachtoher; and even though it hurts they ultimately shouldn't be together and move on.
I used to like Chris so much but now he changed into this abusive monster.
Usually people who accuse their lover of cheating; they are doing it themselves...
Perhaps he is just overly insecure.
Joni shouldn't stay with Chris anymore after what he has done...even though a 2 year + relationship is hard to walk away from.
person Natha
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey there Kolgrim!

You're right, I'm not comfortable with what happened in this chapter. Actually it crossed the border where I enjoyed myself reading your story. You should update your warnings and add "rape". It would be only fair...

Chris snapped, Joni is scared and hurt but I hope he gets his things together at least to a point where he will go to the police. Better soon so that the rape and bodily injury can be proven. Fuck these pictures, they are not important. I wonder why Joni thought of Misha after getting raped by the man he loved for two years or more. Anyway, can't say more to that chapter... Just one request: Please warn me if there's more N/C and rape because as much as it hurts me but I won't be able to continue reading. I just can't read rape for joy and fun. And after all it's supposed for me to be fun reading gay slash.

On to a more happy topic:
You do got a point naughty girl (starting to write slash at 15 and watching porn... I thought only boys are that perverted... ;-)). Sexual preferences are different for everyone, for every couple and there are guys who are only into topping or bottoming (the general opinion is that there are even more exclusive bottoms than tops) or completely don't like anal sex (rare if they didn't make bad experiences...). So you're right, though many, many women only write (and draw) about these "one way" men, but I guess that's because they're woman and in most cases heterosexual, so they just want to see hot guys getting it on. Like many heterosexual guys like to watch lesbian porn.
But what I think weird is Joni. He doesn't come over as a complete bottom. Personality doesn't necessarily have to have to do something with sexual preference but it often has. Joni never tried topping but he wanted in the past. So, I can't see it happen with Chris, too, because is a complete control maniac and he wouldn't voluntarily get into the vulnerable position where he supposedly have to give up control (Though bottoming doesn't have to come with give up control or be vulnerable...). But in an equal and healthy relationship I can see Joni want to try it. Who knows what happens? Perhaps he does not like it, but... *grins* My guess is he will like it, will like both positions. And Misha (or any other guy Joni hopefully ends up soon after castrating Chris and then disemboweling him slowly... Very slowly!) most likely would enjoy it, too, because if done right bottoming does have peaks topping cannot provide... Just think of all the straight guys that do enjoy a finger up their bums while receiving head... :D

Okay, I'm done blabbering. Sorry for my ramble about the rape but it's the truth, I can't stomach it and still look forward to read more. *shrugs, then smiles and waves* Bye Kolgrim!
Nathaniel
person Lusinerd
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really started to like this story. I found it last night and i read the complete chapters yesterday´s night and part of today. I was also reading some of your stories but unfortunatelly I noticed that you have certain affinity to stupid gorgeous guys that let themselves be abused by handsome crazy fucks....but anyways your story not mine.... I hope it doesn´t end up being a predictable story of abuse...It would be fun or interesting for the first time that the passive boy gets some balls and fucking do something about that tart of a stupid boyfriend he has.
Well anyways read ya soon.