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by Kiira

schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesomely amazing...didn't realize I was that far behind when I had to go over the last three chapters....you are doing well with the documentation of an abuser and what the abuse victim goes through. So many MEN and woman face the same kind of uncertainty and you are showing a true face for it.

Well done.
person kylee
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Maybe Chris will realize that he is out of control if he is about to slap Joni in front of Adam. Wishful thinking on my part but I really like how you are playing this out. I still have a little bit of sympathy for Chris because it is going to end in a sad way for him. He has already lost Joni's love.
person Bo
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering when everything would start to get back to Misha and Joni. I really hope somethings comes out of that soon. Chris just needs to go now.
All this denial is very frustrating; but I can entirely see how this could happen in a real life situation.
Everything will be good in the end-- right?
person nicole
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
While reading this story i figure joni to be a wild kind of guy,but i relized he is too assertive toward his father. whil im reading it i though of how i would never let my chikld get away with all of this. Oh and hes switching guys to much, i know he reallly wants demi's brother but he should be stright forward about it. He is owning up to the name slut
person Cindyip
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No, don't leave Joni all alone with Chris!:O
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I'm about to pull my hair out from the frustration. How could Adam be so blind?! How can Joni just take it? I'm slowly losing hope. This is depressing...
person Morganea
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*pulls air out of frustration* JONI BOY STOP BEING SO WEAK FOR YOUR OWN SAKE !!! How long are you gonna stand the way he treats you? I don't want him to get back with Misha but just for him to at least be happy. What kind of long relationship do you claim to have when you can't even have your mind at peace? A bad one. Dump Chris before it's too late! The guy has got serious issues if he can't control himself in front of his friend !
Somebody got to help Joni but how can it be possible if the abused doesn't want talk? I am getting desperate about Joni >_< Please Kolgrim, don't let it get too bad !!
person Jilly
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay misha i love misha
person Kata
schedule February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for bringing Misha and his brothers back. It's so nice to read about them again. Can't help but love Ivo :) But Misha is still my favorite.

I'm happy to read about Misha and Joni. They are both older, not "young brats" anymore ;) I can see some changing in the air?

Can't wait to see where this is going!

P.S. En todellakaan tiedä miksi kirjoitan nämä aina englanniksi :D

xx
person Natha
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello Kolgrim!

Stop being sorry, it's done and over with, you apologized and I'm grateful for it.

Interesting chapter... So much alcohol, one could think beer and vodka is pouring out of the tap in Finland instead of being really expensive... If beer is coming out of the tap then I'm migrating to Finland, weird language and cold weather or not! *winks*

Misha unbends a little, seeing Joni actually as a person, hmm? Good for him, hopefully also good for Joni. And a boost for his ego, hmm? *smirks* Okay...

Joni... Well, boy, I hope there comes a day when you get over what happened. We'll see, I cross my fingers for you, beauty...

And Ivo - it's good to read about him. The mischievous matchmaker, boozer and jester. Just adorable - or likable? Both, I think.

Anyway, hopefully Dima (great boy!) and Misha and Ivo are able to help Joni, or give him the strength to help him himself. I'll wait anxiously to see what's going to happen!

*waves* Bye Kolgrim
Nathaniel