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by Kiira

person Cindyip
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Alright, good Joni and Misha you got it right this time...now if only something like say...a large boulder fell on chris everything will be perfect:)
person Susl
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love your story!!
please update soon! :)
person kylee
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Joni and Misha at a party together when Chris is in Canada. Yes! I hope they end up in bed! I think either way, having a week of freedom will make Joni realize how much he needs his freedom. He can't throw his life away because of some pictures. He should make a plan to deal with the pictures if they should ever surface.
person Cindyip
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Alright, Chris please go back to Canada...although his family doesn't know he's gay. It explains somethings about the family but not excuse his behavior. But Asko, open your eyes this is not the man you want your son to be with*_*
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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Chris... Mitä edes kirjoittaisin. En pitänyt alussa enkä pidä nytkään, sika mikä sika!

Ihana lukea Jonin ja Mishan tapaamisista. Molemmat ovat selkeästi aikuistuneet eivätkä enää niin kakaroita, erityisesti Joni ;) Ja Misha on muuttunut, ehkä tajuaa pian tunteensa jotka me kaikki tiedämme, että ovat pinnan alla?

Vihjaisit tulevaan kappaleeseen, en jaksaisi millään odottaa! :D Mitä tapahtuu Mishan ja Jonin välillä... Auuu...! Ja mitä totisesti toivon, että Misha vetäisisi Chrisiä turpaan jossain vaiheessa... Tai sitten Joni itse, se olisi ehkä parempi, mutta Misha voisi leikkiä a knight in shining armor, you know ;)

Tämä käy koko ajan mielenkiintoisemmaksi!

Finland rules! ;)

xx
person Natha
schedule March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey there Kolgrim!

Finally got to read that chapter. It's nice seeing Joni and Misha being like they were in happier days though at the same moment getting more friendly and close. Let's hope Joni follows his goal to get stronger (not only physically) and stand his ground against Chris and then get away from him. A little help from his family and friends can't hurt either. *nods* Chris seems to start to finally snap. Good, because it makes his mask crack and slip in front of others; bad, because it could hurt Joni (especially physically) more.

Chris' family background? Well, I'd like to know about that, though I'm sick and tired of hearing that your family background is responsible for all your crimes and bad behavior. But we'll see what happens. Hopefully Chris get what he deserves - prison and then a ban from Finland.

So, hope you update soon! *waves*
Nathaniel
person cricri
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There’s nothing more shameful than to be humiliated and intimidated in front of someone you know or even a stranger, but the one who should feel ashamed of oneself is the one who turned a blind eye when witnessing such a thing……(wow, there’s the first serious review I’ve ever wrote…..feel proud of myself)….good work as always, my author highness….
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Joni :( he's so cute! I really wish he'd get rid of Chris and go to Misha! I love this story, please continue soon? Can't wait to read more ^^
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aaww this is the best original story i've read so far! I love it! You know what makes me love it? Not only the yummy sex scenes and the gorgeous interesting characters, but I LOVE Finland ^_________^ and I was so happy when you mentioned Ville Valo because I love him too! yays! Ok I've only read up to chap. 17 cuz I only started reading it a couple of hours ago and haven't stopped, and now it's 2.30am and my eyes are drooping badly. So I'll continue soon and review again!! ARRGHH!! I don't wanna stop reading but I need sleep! Anyways, thanks for sharing such a brilliant story :D
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey Kolgrim,
I love all your stories so much. When I saw that you had updated Foolish Games I was just on the brink to another tearful breakdown (got some shitty times at home) BUT your wonderfully written and interesting new chapter kept me distracted for a while. See, you help people by just writing a story, nice eh?^^
Anyway, I'm so mad at all the characters right now: Joni doesn't trust his close friends and family enough to just tell them the truth and is too afraid of public humiliation and all the others are too shy in their attempts to shed a light on his situation...I hope erm...Chris was his name? omg I forgot...Anyway, I hope he slips up while Adam is still there, I guess he would be the only one with a small chance of having some kind of authoritarian influence on him and acquire those 'incriminating' photos of Joni's...butt. I hope, I hope. And while I do that, I wish for the next chapter to come quickly and release me of this tension of not knowing what will happen to Joni, the sweetheart...
Ok, enough^^ Thank you, again.
Tiolore