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February 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
For starters I could have never imagined from reading the summary that the story would have so much content,dealing with so many topics. The summary didn't give much to the imagination,I read it because of the high rating and it was definetly worth it:)I think you make a fine writer,I specially liked the way you wrote about their sessions with the therapist as if ur also one...ok so what I want to say in end is I love the main couple and their story,thank you for bringing it us^_^now I'm off to read the sequel can't wait.
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April 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
God, Joni is such a stubborn brat, even at age 20.
I liked this fan fiction very much, but Joni's stubbornness was too much. Had to stop reading. Wasn't really my cup of tea. There's those who are stubborn and know their limits, and then there are those are stubborn to the core.
But overall, I had enjoyed this story very much and I hope that Joni and Misha will have a happy ending like the fox-story that Misha had told Joni while he was in rest.
You are an amazing writer, don't let others tell you otherwise. I'll be looking forward to more of your fan fictions.
Happy writing!
I liked this fan fiction very much, but Joni's stubbornness was too much. Had to stop reading. Wasn't really my cup of tea. There's those who are stubborn and know their limits, and then there are those are stubborn to the core.
But overall, I had enjoyed this story very much and I hope that Joni and Misha will have a happy ending like the fox-story that Misha had told Joni while he was in rest.
You are an amazing writer, don't let others tell you otherwise. I'll be looking forward to more of your fan fictions.
Happy writing!
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April 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
aww kawaii so glad they managed to sleep together :D quite a nice ending ,cant believe how many chapters its been now lol very excited for a sequel if u do one :D sad i have nothing to read now though lol
awsome wrk cant wait to read more x
awsome wrk cant wait to read more x
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April 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I know I know I haven't reviewed in a long time. (changed my pen name) The computer crashed and then lost my stories by the time I got back on well......I'm stupid I forgot the title of it. So I just gave up. I found it after you reviewed my story so thank you for that!
Keep chris in prison please.......I hate that guy. if he gets out Joni could be hurt alot more and Mischa really cares for him. I would like them to get together. Might I add that this is the longest story I've read on AFF I mean fifty some chapters? HOw long is this story going to last? I love it every part but I hate the suspense of Chris in prison, pretending to change. Don't buy it for one minute. Joni still affraid of intimancy.
anyway enough rambling Love this story and can't wait for the next chapter.
Keep chris in prison please.......I hate that guy. if he gets out Joni could be hurt alot more and Mischa really cares for him. I would like them to get together. Might I add that this is the longest story I've read on AFF I mean fifty some chapters? HOw long is this story going to last? I love it every part but I hate the suspense of Chris in prison, pretending to change. Don't buy it for one minute. Joni still affraid of intimancy.
anyway enough rambling Love this story and can't wait for the next chapter.
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April 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is such a good story! I started reading it a few days ago, and haven't been able to stop since then! Now I guess I'll have to be a good girl and wait for new updates like everyone else. xD
For some reason, I get the impression that Chris isn't quite done yet. I don't know what he was thinking when in the prison hospital, but I know before then he pretty much promised himself this wasn't going to be the end of it. Though I do have to wonder about the pictures... Whether or not those are actually the only copies. If so, then I have to wonder what his new plan is. Either way, Joni and Misha definitely shouldn't let their guard down.
Great story and I can't wait for new updates!
For some reason, I get the impression that Chris isn't quite done yet. I don't know what he was thinking when in the prison hospital, but I know before then he pretty much promised himself this wasn't going to be the end of it. Though I do have to wonder about the pictures... Whether or not those are actually the only copies. If so, then I have to wonder what his new plan is. Either way, Joni and Misha definitely shouldn't let their guard down.
Great story and I can't wait for new updates!
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January 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow i have just finished reading all the chapters so far, i love your story :D do find it a bit hard to read in places,with grammer n spelling etc, but the content is good, characters r soo cool, i luv misha n joni so much ,u should have seen me wen the chapters were about him n chris i was like quick get back to misha,n the abused scenes where good, my emotions have been all over the place in this story from good to bad n even scared,i nearly had a panic attack wen joni did!!..
well done n keep it up im desperate for for,dnt make me wait too long lol x
well done n keep it up im desperate for for,dnt make me wait too long lol x
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November 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've actually read the whole story twice again..... to be honest I don't feel one bit of sympothy for Chris at all. I mean I've been abused as a kid and it hasn't turned me into some possesive jerk, there is no excuse, none. I don't care about a person's past at all, and anyone who comits a crime should be severly punished for it. I was almost hoping that they would hire a hit out on Chris.... but then again I don't approve of murder either. Chris just makes me sooooooooo mad and he honestly needs to just stay behind bars, maybe have karma turn on him that way he understands how it felt when he hurt Joni.
And yes at first I thought that Joni was a self-centered, egotistic, little spoiled shit...... but..... he's grown on me :P I happen to care about Misha too although Joni's right sometimes Misha can be a prick. But it isn't that Misha wants too its jus that Misha isn't good with words and tries to hard and sometimes I think he over-analyzes everything. I'm glad that the two decided to take it slow.
Now at the trial, I wanted to itch-slap the defense attorny. Joni had already been through so much and here is that attorney. Ugh I know its her job, but I can't stand attorny's who represent the guilty. And Chris still thinks of Joni as a possesion?
God NO..... Don't let anyone be hurt by Chris, I know he's thinking about revenge, but he's honestly done enough. And I don't care if Joni cheeted with 2,000 sheep a donkey, 5 whales, and 12,000 men its still no excuse for what Chris did to him. (sorry blowin off steam my own mom was in a abusive relationship when I was younger... Lucky for her she got out and away...... but still people like Chris really, really, really piss me off) I'm just hoping as the auther, you won't let anything bad happen to Misha, Joni, Jyrie, or Joni's Dad.
Ha Ha, I think this is my longest review, but Like I've said read the whole story and, well, a little fumed by Chris's attitude, sad that Joni is still not all better (but of course rape takes a long time to heal from, I don't think you could ever forget but I'm sure he's going to get better right)
I happen to like Ivo too, I love his jokes and attitude though I kind of wanted to see more of Dima, Joni's best friend. Anyway I'm a fan of your story and I'm adding it to my reccommended reading so I guess I'm done ranting and gabbing. I'll be waiting for your next chapter patiently.
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And yes at first I thought that Joni was a self-centered, egotistic, little spoiled shit...... but..... he's grown on me :P I happen to care about Misha too although Joni's right sometimes Misha can be a prick. But it isn't that Misha wants too its jus that Misha isn't good with words and tries to hard and sometimes I think he over-analyzes everything. I'm glad that the two decided to take it slow.
Now at the trial, I wanted to itch-slap the defense attorny. Joni had already been through so much and here is that attorney. Ugh I know its her job, but I can't stand attorny's who represent the guilty. And Chris still thinks of Joni as a possesion?
God NO..... Don't let anyone be hurt by Chris, I know he's thinking about revenge, but he's honestly done enough. And I don't care if Joni cheeted with 2,000 sheep a donkey, 5 whales, and 12,000 men its still no excuse for what Chris did to him. (sorry blowin off steam my own mom was in a abusive relationship when I was younger... Lucky for her she got out and away...... but still people like Chris really, really, really piss me off) I'm just hoping as the auther, you won't let anything bad happen to Misha, Joni, Jyrie, or Joni's Dad.
Ha Ha, I think this is my longest review, but Like I've said read the whole story and, well, a little fumed by Chris's attitude, sad that Joni is still not all better (but of course rape takes a long time to heal from, I don't think you could ever forget but I'm sure he's going to get better right)
I happen to like Ivo too, I love his jokes and attitude though I kind of wanted to see more of Dima, Joni's best friend. Anyway I'm a fan of your story and I'm adding it to my reccommended reading so I guess I'm done ranting and gabbing. I'll be waiting for your next chapter patiently.
CrimsonWatersAlien
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October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG I just want to freakin' smack Joni, he's a freaking spoiled brat! His father may love him but he didn't help him one bit in spoiling him. Interesting story I hope either Joni changes his ways or that he is the one who winds up with a broken heart. It might teach him a thing are to about beaing a over egotistic brat. I like Misha though C: I'll be interested to read the rest of your story but Joni.... he irritates the Furuku out of me.
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October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*shakes head* Well I feel sorry for Joni, but I still think he's a creep and he's lucky Misha even cared enough to keep an eye on him. Another interesting chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO Okay I know I said I really wanted to smack Joni around but after reading this far in the story NOOO, How could Mischa say those things, he's going to great it. Great story by the way. I can't believe his father shipped him off, that's the worst thing you can do sometimes. And in honesty HE never listened to his son, he talked about his son being a police officer but didn't like any of Joni's answers he heard, but never listened. And chris,, Ugh. I want Joni back with Misha and for Misha to apologize.
Great work as an author
CrimsonWatersAlien
Great work as an author
CrimsonWatersAlien