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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it's a really interesting story that i liked a lot. but just feels so rushed.
in the first chapter where Nuzhah shows such disdain for Kaif and emasculates him, some of the she, he, her are confusing. and when thoughts are in dialogue quotes its hard to follow.
in the first chapter where Nuzhah shows such disdain for Kaif and emasculates him, some of the she, he, her are confusing. and when thoughts are in dialogue quotes its hard to follow.