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for The Broken Vase

by lordoberon

person Bluebird161221
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was.... undeniably erotic.
Get a beta, though- there were a few repetitions of unnecessary words that a beta could have spotted easily, and made the story flow a bit better.
Not that that stopped me from panting along with Jesse, mind.
Keep writing.
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