rate_review Reviews

I like it. Update.

It's too shoooort!
Heh, I'm a total sucker for incest stories, hope to see an update soon.

I read the summary and then clicked on the link. I looked at the scroll bar to see how long it was, I swear, if it had been much longer, I wouldn't have bothered reading, and ohhhh god it would have been my loss! This is a fascinating idea! I've played with narcissistic personality disorder before, and just ordinary narcissists too, but it never even occurred to portray it like this!

And then I thought "Great concept, must be badly written." And then I was proved wrong, like, immediately! That being proved wrong was then followed by an obscure train of thought about the word-non-word "badly", and why I would use that word-non-word, and why I'm thinking about something that has absolutely nothing to do with your story... *clears throat*

As I was saying, great start! I will certainly look for more from this fic in the future!

~C~

I like this already. Hopefully future chapters will be longer? More soon please!