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for The Game

by lordoberon

schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:D This is pretty interesting so far! I've only read one chapter so far, but I'll definitely read more.
person shiden
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my im glad i stumbled across your story
it was very good very very good. i normally dont read stories with so and so's POV cause it doesn't feel real..
but your story was good :P

thank you for writing it... its made my dreary day nice
person irinutza
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very hot ;)
i liked it so please update
person J42
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"But I could guess it was Leander taking something down from the wall. But what?..."
But, but, but... what, indeed? You are e.v.i.l! This is great - more please! ;-) Thanks!
person Kuromei
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot. Very hot. *fans herself* For the love of all yaoi, please update soon! XD
person Finnel
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
((drools...))
OMFG! I really need more of this!!!!
Please update soon!!! I may have to hunt you down to find out what happens if you don't!!!
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful very hot a great read
cant wait to see more
person J42
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very intense! I loved it! Thanks so much for sharing. ;-) Is there more, please?